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 * THE PERFECT MURDER ** April the 4 th A child was born as a product of a violation, his name was Sebastian Crack. His childhood was not a very good one, he was on drugs and he was a thief, his mother died when he was 15. After years Sebastian decided to work, and he stopped consuming drugs. Five years later Sebastian was an important person, he was on business and he earned a lot of money. August the 3rd Sebastian married Angelique and one year later they had a baby boy named Austin, they had a good life and they were a united family. One day Sebastian arrived home angryly, he looked worried. His wife asked him what had happened and he told her that the school called him, Austin was kidnapped. Two days after they received a call, it was a man with a hoarse voice, he told Sebastian that they wanted money and that they knew that he got some billions, Sebastian only said : “Well, you don't know me... you should be scared” and he left the telephone there. He was planning something all night, he ignored his wife and started working on his plan. The next day by the end of his way to work he didn't return home, he made many calls and he went home at night, his wife was worried and asked him where he was and what he was planning to do, Sebastian told her that he was going to kill the man who had their son no matter what happened they will have their son again. Sebastian called the man and he didn't answer, he located the man and he went for his son. He arrived to a dark place and hid, after a few minutes he listened to the voice of his wife, he heard the conversation. She was saying to the man that her husband would arrive at any minute and she ordered the man to kill his husband, Sebastian couldn't believe it!!! He called his wife and she answered him and she said to him: ”Honey, where are you? I am worried. Don't came back late please” and Sebastian said: ”Babe, do you love me?” and his wife said yes, Sebastian told her: ”Even though if I had no money?” and his wife said: "Of course!" And immediately a loud noise scared Sebastian, the man caught him and after a long fight, the man throbs Sebastian,then Sebastian use an iron to throb the man and he left the man unconsent, after that Sebastian killed the man and rescued his son that was in a dirty room and he was in a corn crying. After that, both them went home and his wife was with an old man and that man had a gun, he put Austin in his bedroom and he asked his wife who he was, and the man answered: ”I'm your father ”, Sebastian was shocked and suddenly his father shot him but he was not death, and he listened to the conversation that his wife and father had, they were talking about who will stay with his money and he started thinking that how his father has found him if he left his mother when he was born and exactly in that moment his wife fell down, that man have killed his wife and Sebastian remembered that he had a gun so he took it out and shot the man twice but when he turned around he saw his wife with a big gun and she said: ”Sebastian, first I need you to know that I only love you for your money and nothing else and that kid upstairs is not your son and I have planned this moment for a long time so I will enjoy it, sorry” and then she killed Sebastian and a pleasant smile appeared in her face, she felt like the winner of the story, after that she burnt the body and she threw the ashes to the sea, and she stayed with all his money.  =====

**__Questions for Peer Reviewers__ **
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.) 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?