SO-Jacqueline+X.

**Introduction:**
Hi, my name is Jacqueline or Jackie for short. I am the middle child of 7 children, but 9 people in total of my whole family. My mom had all girls and no boys, so we always feel bad for my dad. I am very athletic, and play almost every sport. My favorite colors are purple, red, orange, yellow, green, blue, teal, aqua, and turquoise. My best friends are Janette Turner, Alaina Q, and Peter Twite. Janette is the one who is always different and the agressive one. Alaina is the competitive one, and Peter's the one who always makes me feel good about myself:) My life is very difficult, but with Janette shes always there to make me laugh, and Alaina is the one who makes me happy, plus Peter who's always there to put a smile on my face. My favorite movies are Twilight and Monsters Inc. but that movie is so sad haha. I am 12 yrs. old, my birthday is February 7th, 1997. My favorite singers/bands are, Owl City, 3oh 3, Click 5, NLT, Hedley, Missy Higgins, Marie Digby, and VFC. But most importantly I'm loving life with my family and friends! <3

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?