Michael+L

**Siblings: 2 sisters and 1 brother** Feel free to upload your podcast or a picture if you like.
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 * Grade: 8**
 * Best Holiday: Christmas **
 * Birth Month: July **
 * Career Goals: become professional athlete **
 * Favorite Rappers/Artists: Lil wayne, Asher roth, EMINEM **
 * Favorite Food: chinese food **
 * Favorite Munchies: granola bars **
 * Favorite soft drink: mountain dew **
 * Favorite Subject: gym with Tom **
 * Pet Peeve: nothing **
 * Pets: 2 dogs **

Craig is from the hood and is very interested in military equipment. One day a bomb hits his hood and he knows what it is, it is an f2 bomb and it makes everybody tired. Craig runs inside and gets the antidote and saves everyone. Craig then turns a sickly greenish color, and right before he passes out Billy hit him and it saved him.

One of the people is Joe, Joe Is a scientist and was conducting an experiment to talk to aliens. Joe goes back to his experiment and after the bomb he hears aliens, and a few moths later he wins the Nobel piece prize. The aliens that he heard were actually not aliens, but it was his son Bobby Jr. making noises into his experiment. Bobby then hits Joe over the head with a bat, and gets knocked out, and then Bobby steals all of his money.

Joe meets Amy at the awards and she was his competitor and she congratulates him, but she is mad, because she is the person who dropped the f2 bomb on his hood, to try and sabotage his experiment, but she ended up making him win. She goes home and stays depressed for the rest of her life.

Tom is a gym teacher at the local school. This is where the f2 bomb first hit, he was knocked 0ut and woke up a day later, and his skin was orange and turquoise. He was unaware of this at the time, and when he went home to his son and wife, they screamed monster and ran away. When he looked in the mirror he started to cry.

Mike his student was next door, and when he heard the ruckus next door he went over with a baseball bat, and was just about to hit the odd colored thing over the head, but then Tom turned around and explained what happened. Mike didn’t believe him, so he hit him with the bat. The End!!

Questions for Peer Reviewers

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? Yes, i think the plot is original i haven't seen a lot of stories about stuff like that.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? Yeah. I think that the idea if their skin turning colors because of the result of his "hood" being bombed was a cool idea and could even be turned into a cool movie.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? I think all the characters were well done because they all were very different as people, but had the same problem.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? The imagery of the colors they turned was well done.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? ||