Daniel

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 * **Hi, my name is Dan **
 * Grade: 8**
 * Best Holiday: ****Christmas**
 * Birth Month: May **
 * Career Goals: **
 * Favorite Band(s): Miley Cyrus <Favorite Food: Mozzarella Sticks **
 * Favorite Munchies: Chips **
 * Favorite soft drink: Sprite **
 * Favorite Subject: Social Studies **
 * Pet Peeve: None **
 * Pets: Cat **

Miley Cyrus had just come out of the theater when paparazzo was chasing her down the street to her car. She got to the car and they were surrounding her so she floored it and was gone. She was driving to her house when she got into a head on car accident. There was a drunk driver going 90mph in a stolen car into on coming traffic. Miley was driving on the speed limit when she saw his headlights and tried to get out of the way but he was going too fast and hit her head on. Both cars were totaled, no one knew about the condition of the drivers but 911 was on the way because a near by cop reported the accident. He blocked off the roads and waited for 911 to arrive. The firefighters tried to get the people out of the car so that the ambulances could check out the people. Once they got them out of the cars they looked ok but were sent to the hospital. When they got to the hospital that’s when everyone noticed who she was.

Questions for Peer Reviewers

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? Yes, its orIGINAL but why would u want to hurt miley, shes so fabulous,NOT 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? .Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? y What could be added or changed? i I want to know if miley lives or not or if her secret was found out 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? yes Are characters likable and enjoyable? kind of .Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? Yes, the characters are enjoyable, how could they not, it;s miley! 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story?kind of .What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? I cannot possibly fathom why anynone would like to hurt miley 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? the amount What suggestions do you have for the author? Make miley live!!!!

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? no its not very original. maybe it would be better if the main character wasn't miley cyrus.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? the problem wasn't very interesting r suspenseful, mostly because it was about miley cyrus

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? the characters are like life mostly because miley cyrus is a real person.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? next time maybe there could be less miley cyrus and more selena gomez =)

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? the area you need the most improvement are the characters of the story like miley cyrus

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? ||