SO-Sam+C.


 * Introduction: My name is sam and i like to play call of duty on wii world at war. My favorite place to eat is Little Ceasers and my favorite thing to do is play wii.**

**Paste your story here:**
Bunny Massacre By: Samuel Czelatdko My friend Will and I like to hunt bunnies and I call this story bunny massacre because we were hunting and we hunt with bb guns I had a Springfield and Will had a M40 and I sniped he went in and shot randomly. It was a lot of fun because when I sniped they would die. Will would go right next to bunnies and shot them down it was bloody after that and there was like 20 bunnies. We did not know what to do with them so we put them on target boards and we shot them more with bow and arrows. To be continued........people that love animals this is a false story and i have never harmed an amimal.

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?