iskl_min

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.

Hi, my name is Min. My favorite sport is soccer. The reason is I like to play and also enjoy playing it. My favorite games are Fifa 08, New Super Mario Bros and Mario Cart. They are all very enjoyable games and very famous. I start to play them since one and half years ago but now, I don't really play it in the week days. I one play them in Saturday, less than 25 minutes because it is terrible for our eyes and brain.

**Paste your story here:**
Lover of Animals

“Hi, my name is Luke Milner”. Today in our class, there is a new student named Luke. He is a generous and gentle person. Few days past on and we became a really good friends. But one day, he asked me “Do you like wild animals?” Without moment’s hesitation, I answered, “Yes I do love them. I am in schools SPCA and in this summer vacation I’m going to Siberia to help and adopt baby Siberian tigers.” When I answered, he looked very shock.

One day, I heard my friends talking to each other about something. I was curious so I asked one of my friends “What is going on there?” Then, they answered, “Didn’t you know that Luke’s uncle is a famous hunter, Paul Craz, who killed a lot of animals, especially tigers, which is one of your favorite animals!” I was surprised. Soon, I decided to tell Luke his uncle should stop killing animals.

The next day, when I met Luke, I asked him would you tell your uncle to stop hunting animals. Then he replied “Well Larson, do you know in this summer, my uncle is going to Russia to hunt tigers with his friends. I will try my best to go there but that will be impossible, though.” “Wait a second, why don’t you join our SPCA, so you are able to go to Russia with me, to stop him.” I suggested. Then he said “Honestly Larson, I love animals and I hate my uncle killing innocent animals but I’m not sure if my uncle will listen to us or no because he is a very stubborn person but anyway, I will try my best.” That day, Luke joined the SPCA, so he is able to go to remote area of Russia for helping tigers.

Well, few months past and it was finally our summer break and soon, it was a day for us to take a flight to Russia. After a long flight to Russia, we had to ride an extra ten hours or more to reach the place, where we all will stay. The next day, we all went to the habitat of the tigers. It was summer though but it was cold. We were surprised when we saw huge tiger with it’s two cubs. “Wow, they are so cool” everybody said in amaze. Then suddenly, there was a loud “Bangs” of the gun! We all turned around and spotted the five tall, muscular hunters with shotguns and other weapon. “Who are you anyway, shooting guns in this place” shouted our teacher. “I’m Paul Craz, the hunter. We came here to hunt tigers. Wait a minute, is that you, Luke. What are you doing here, cousin” yelled Paul Craz. “I came here to stop you from killing poor animals, uncle” replied Luke angrily.

The suddenly, Luke’s uncle shot a bullet. After that there was a loud roar. He actually shot at the mother tiger. It fell to the ground and died. “No!” everyone shouted. Everyone, including the teacher were shocked they can weren’t able to move. From that moment Luke’s uncle was just to fire the bullet to the cubs. Suddenly, Luke blocked the way and he was shot twice. Some of students fainted because they are horrified. “Luke, don’t die, Luke! Please…………. Paul Craz! You mean evil devil. What have you done to Luke, you killed him,” I screamed. Soon, we called the police and ambulance. Luke went straight to hospital quickly, but he was dead already. We all cried for Luke’s death. Paul Craz and his friends went to jail for killing Luke and hunting tigers. Few days later, we came back to our home. We adopted those cubs, having a permission from the special place where you get permission for adopting animals.

Even though Luke is gone, his kindness to our nature is never to be forgotten.

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? The story is very original, but i dont understand why you started with "hi my name is luke milner" but overalll good story.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?