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Hey my name is kaitlyn, but people call me katie. i love sports, my favorite sports are basketball, swimming, diving, baseball, dancing, and i love gymnastic! i have been a in gymnastic for about 6 years now. if i have any free time i love to spend it with my friends and family! my favorite movies are baby mama and one missed call (scary!!)===== well i hope the you will enjoy my story please leave comments so that i can make my story better for other readers :) thank you sincerly, katie

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** Florida ** ** By: Kaitlyn Stein ** About 3 years ago my family and some family friends went to Florida for spring break. The horrible pain of having to sit in the air plane the old, dented, ripped (some,) and just uncomfortable to sit in for a large amount of time. As we slowly and smoothly get off your plane we are finally landed in Tampa, Florida. But that wasn’t any better then in the plane because we still had an hour drive to Orlando, Florida. It was extremely late and just being eight years old my normal bed time was eight O’clock but begin on the plane I was fully off energy from the excitement of begins in the air on a plane for the first time ever. But finally we got to the hotel, our hotel was beautiful. The lobby was full of flowers and at the front desk was the nicest area in the lobby it was full of gold trim and granite counter tops it was eye popping. As we walked up to our room we noticed that kitchen it was huge! It seemed like it was half the room. It was stocked with food as we walked in the door. It was late so we all headed for bed. So we could be charged for the morning ahead. As the morning approached we were of to Disney World. As we walked in the entrance. The entrance was tall, wide, and filled with gold features. After we got far into the park we started to look for the roller coasters. As we went on, ride after ride, we finally got to the mega roller coaster. It was 50 feet high It almost looked like it went into the sky but lets be realistic we all know that it can’t be that high. As my mom, my dad, cousin, and her mom and dad, and I are all standing in line for the tower of terror. The tower of terrier is the tallest ride in the Disney World, on the ride you start out going through an area that looks like an abandon warehouse, then two “ghost” pop out and scare the live day light out of you when you go around a corner your drop about 12-13 feet then you are lifted up in to the air and then you’re dropped again and it keeps on repeating over, over, and over. After being dropped around 10-12 times they bring you down to ground level and bring you around to the main area where you start out in the begin, of the ride. After that thrilling ride my family was off to the gift shop me and my cousin each got a necklace that had our names on them. It was already about 5 o’clock when we left Disney World. So now we were off to go get some dinner at a Japanese steak house as we walked from the parking lot to the restaurant the door was tall and heavy the restaurant was located on a strip mall, as we walked in it was a clam area with water falls pouring into a pond filled with fish and other animals the front desk lady said, “Hi how may I help you?” My parents and aunt and uncle replied, “Hi we would like to get a table with eight chairs and we would also we would like to have our food cooked in front of us.” “Ok well it will be a 15 minute wait so we can get your table ready for your food and we need to clean it off from the people that where there before you,” said the lady from the front desk My family and I walked over to the water fall and watched the fish go from on area of the water fall to the other. As we waited my brother was so tried from Disney land he slowly started to dose off and we had to keep on waking him up every time that me tried to go to sleep we had to wake him a lot but luckily soon the front desk lady came to bring us to our table. As the lady brought us to the table, the table was located in the middle of the restaurant. All the tables where covered with silk cloths, china cups and plates on the table, the chairs where leather with very comfortable cushions so sitting on the chairs were no problem. If you can believe the restaurant chairs where more comfortable them the airport plane chairs. The restaurant was not all the service of them cooking in front of you. Some tables are for just ordering off the menu and they bring you your food and then you eat it and go. In stead of just dinning we had our food cooked in front of us, but first we had to pick out what we wanted there was ton of food to choose from.

** TO BE CONTINUED………. **

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