BF-Blanca+S

Hi, i am Blanca Sanahuja Casas and i am from Spain like all my famally, I am 11 years old and I have blond hair, blue eyes, and I go to B.F.I.S. I like to paint and play tennis although I dont play so good. What do you like to do? Do you like to ski? I do, on winter when it was much colder i ski every weekand. I have to littele brothers Roman of 9 years old and Enrique of 3 yers old, but i still have older sister her name is Maria Teresa of 13 years old. Where are you going on Semana Santa? I am goint to Miami, Canada and New York. __ The Three Friends __

Once upon a time, there were three best friends called: Miley, Mathew, & Michael. They were poor, there parent died when they were small,Miley had brown long hair as Michel, but Mathew has blond hair,Miley likes to dance, she is really good at it, Mathew likes to play soker with Michel. So there pet was a dolphin. They lived near a river and every morning they saw there pet, the dolphin. They drank from the water every day,it was all christaly and fresh and one day they saw a magic fish. That fish was very colorful it had a lot of colors, nearly all the colors of the world, at least it had my favorites colors which are pink, orange, blue.... The fish told them that there was a castle near the river a medium castle and the three friends were curious to know about it, this castle was very old, it had all type of insects, like spiders, bugs...

In that castle there was a witch an old bad witch, that witch had a cat like in the moviesit was scary and black, that witch happened to be magic, that horrible witch had a trapped prince, that prince was rich, he had all type of castles, Miley said if there was a way to save him of that bad witch, and the fish respond: Yes there is one, but that is impossible. Miley, Mathew, & Michel decided to rescuer the prince.The dolphin said if he could help in any way, the fish said that that was O.K .Suddenly the fish reminded that they couldn’t go because they didn’t had powers so the fish tried to give them powers but he couldn’t so he restart and finally it worked.

So the next morning at 7:00pm they woke up and went to the adventure. When they arrived, Miley had the power of the earth, Mathew had the power of the water and Michel had the power of the wind. When they came the witch saw them coming and they started to fight for the prince so when they were fighting Miley was hiding to go rescue the prince, when finally the witch was dead or at least with out powers they got the prince and went home. When they arrive to there houses miley set on his favorite sofa, but Michel offer his .The prince started to talk and he said told tyhem how he become trapt and the prince said that he was reach and all his family think that he is dead but now they will know the truth. Two years latter Miley and the prince got married and her best friends and her, where rich and they lived happily ever after.

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1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?