Greg

**Siblings: 1 sister** Feel free to upload your podcast or a picture if you like.
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 * Grade:8**
 * Best Holiday: Christmas **
 * Birth Month: June **
 * Career Goals: IDK **
 * Favorite Band(s): IDK **
 * Favorite Food: Pizza **
 * Favorite Munchies: Pop corn **
 * Favorite soft drink: Coke **
 * Favorite Subject: Gym **
 * Pet Peeve: None **
 * Pets: 2 cats and a dog **

One day Billy, Jim, and Andrew were in their favorite class gym. They were plating basketball when a spaceship crashed through the ceiling and landed on their gym teacher. A floating orb came out and started to talk, it said “ People the invasion will begin in 48 hours be ready.” The 3 boy run out of the school and go to Jim’s house. Since Jim’s dad is in the military so he has a lot of guns. The 3 boys grab standard military M16’s. They also get 2 M9’s each, and ammo for both gun. The 3 boys call Jims dad and tell him that aliens are going to attack the planet. Jim’s dad informs the president and the troops are ready for battle. 2 days pass very quickly. At 9 in the morning the sirens start to go off. The invasion has begun. Everyone was expecting huge man eating aliens but instead they were little furry balls. They ran around by jumping. They had little guns that shot out green goo. They Humans started to laugh and started to kick and throw the aliens. The 3 boys were having fun shooting and beating up the aliens. About 2 hours later all of the aliens were dead, but the boys fun was just beginning.

They boys go back to Jims house and get more ammo for their guns and also get a MP5 each. The boys planned to get in a Ship the aliens came down in and take over their planet. So the boys walk around their town and they find a UFO. They get in and hit the home button and get zapped to the alien’s home planet. The planed is between Mars and Jupiter.

The 3 boys land in the planet. They get out and start to sneak around. When they are close to the biggest building the alarm starts to go off and all of the aliens start to attack them. They kill them really easily in about 3 hours of fighting they kill the army and take over the planet. Jimmy calls his dad and the military comes up to the planet. Before the 3 boys leave they strike oil 100,000,000,000,000 gallons of it. They sell it to the government for 30 billion dollars each. They fly back home and put there money in different banks but keep 10 million out to spend on what ever they want.

The end

Questions for Peer Reviewers

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? This plot was deffinatly original. It was kind of confusing and out there.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?Yes, there was little bit of suspence and interest.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? You could add more details to how they got to space.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? I think that the story should've been a little bit longer. You should not

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? ||