SO-Jessica+R.

**Introduction:**
Hi my name is Jessica Rageth my favorite food is chocolete. my favorite thing to do is //__READ READ READ!!!!!!!__//

HAVE A NICE DAY!!

When I Sprained My Ankle By Jessica Rageth One time when I was young, I dashed across the bridge and down the bean stock, of the Elementary school playground. All of a sudden when I was at the middle of the bean stock, I heard “nana nana booboo you can’t get me.” So I jumped to the ground, suddenly I felt a sharp pain stab thru my leg. Every thing went by in a blur. Soon I was in the car being rushed to the hospital. In the car there were tears streaming down my face. When I was in the x-ray room of Luther Middlefield they twisted to my foot side, (they have no idea how much pain your in.) now it is over, and I knew it was only a sprain. //(**Although, it still hurt,)**// as I was walking out, I said, //“I am **__NEVER__** doing that again”!// (About three years later.)

“Hey mom will you tell me a story about when I was young?” “Sere, what one do you want to here?” “Tell me about when I sprained my ankle.” “All right, once when you where young, you dashed across the Flynn’s (your elementary school.) Play Ground Bridge, climbed down the bean stock, and suddenly heard //nana booboo you cannot get me!// Therefore, you jumped to the ground hoping to find a quicker way to the bridge. Instead, as soon as you hit the ground you felt a sharp pain stab thru your leg. Then you were calling me at work to come get you to bring you to the hospital. When you were in the x-ray room, as the doctor twisted your foot to the side I could see the pain in your eyes. Nevertheless, the doctors said that it was just a sprain. But as you came out you said //I am never doing that again//!” “Well how did you like that?” “It was great, mommy permtion to laugh?” “Permission granted!”
 * //__ HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! __//**

(Moreover, we still laugh today.)

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?