DM-Jedediah+W

Grade: 8** **Siblings: A little brother**
 * Hi, my name is Jedediah Wilson
 * Best Holiday: Christmas! **
 * Birth Month: December **
 * Career Goals: Supreme Court of Canada **
 * Favorite Band(s): NICKLEBACK! Green day, INine, ect... **
 * Favorite Food: Cake! **
 * Favorite Munchies: Dill pickle chips **
 * Favorite soft drink: Orange pop **
 * Favorite Subject: Every subject that you could ever get in school! **
 * Pet Peeve: Scratching a wall or chalkboard **
 * Pets: 2 fish, a dog, and a VERY big cat! **

Hello everyone! I'm Jedediah (but you can call me Jed)! I love badminton, martial arts, and swimming! I have lots of best friend who I always hang out with everyday, and there pretty cool! My favorite animal is the Snowy owl! I am usually very hyper (ask around everyone will tell you that I am)! I also attended a few drama classes a while back, I love acting, its pretty fun once you get the drift of it. Another one of my likes is Law, I really like law, and I hope to be a member of the Supreme Court of Canada someday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite phrase is "Yo Yo Yo wassup home chickens!! Dis is MC Turkey!!!" (I know its a little insane)! I also LOVE to play a game called MapleStory! If you have that game, my character is thedevil183 and jimmy3214312 (I think thats what the numbers are) and by the way, those characters are in Scania! Anyway, like my favorite phrases says, Peace out home chickens!! XD Well hello everyone, gather around the fire and hear the tale of a boy, a boy born into a life with a raging war.... This boy's name was Adrian, and little did Adrian know, he had an important part to play in the world that was called Amos. Now, one day adrian came across a couple kids playing on a street close to his house, they were of different tribes (Archers, Magicians, Pirates, Warriors, and Rogues). Adrian long for some source of strength of mind, or just strength in general. That night, he said to his mother "I wish I had some kind of power". Well in Amos, everyone has some kind of strength, little did Adrian know, his might be the most powerful. All his mother said was "Well take the test when you turn seven". (Luckily, Adrian was turning seven on the following week). So days passed as he waited for the day that he could take the test and become a true member of Amos. Finally, his chance arrived, he turned seven. He packed up, said goodbye to his parents, and headed out the door. He arrived at the testing area on the following day, apparently, he passed the test with sheer ease, moving from place to place with incredible power. Then, he ventured to the final place, and of course, he passed, and the master of the testing area said "Good, I shall now take you to a new place in Amos". Adrian was suddenly overwhelmed with confusion, he didn't expect to leave his city. He liked it, he just wanted to be like the kids on the street. "Wait, wait, hold up, I'm.... Leaving...?" He struggled to say with tearing eyes. "Well, yes of course, this land is full of adventure, there are six cities, Kerning City, Heneys, Lith harbour, Natilus harbour, Elinia, and Perion." Well apparently Elinia seemed most intriguing to him, so he chose that city.

As he arrived, he headed to the home that was bought for him, and walked as he marvelled, this place looked like a forest. The city was situated on trees high in the sky. Finally, he got some information that Grendel, the magician instructor was recruiting, so he headed to the Elinian Library (Which is where Grendel supposedly lived).

"Hello...?" Adrian called into the dimly lit library. "Well hello there young one, and what might your name be?" Replied a voice. "My name might be Adrian," he said trying to be funny. "Well, do you wish to become a member of the magic society?" "Yes!" Was all Adrian had time to say before a light appeared over his head in a swirling motion. Strength overcame him, he could suddenly feel every presence of the library just with his mind, he could talk to them. Most of all, he had a strength, a powerful strength of magic. Grendel explained that to become a true user of magic, Adrian must first pass a vigirous test. He struggled and focused and fell and rised, each test getting harder and harder to complete, but alas, he mananged to finish them within the time that he had. Hopefully, in due time, he would become a real member of Elinia.

After his last test of focus was completed, Grendel granted the little and quite weakened magician magic power, he was to use this power to venture off on his own, He was always working, always focusing, days, weeks, months, and years pasted him with struggle. He was now ready to become an Ice lightning wizard, a Fire Poison wizard, or a Cleric. Now, Adrian being confused, asked what each of the classes could do. Grendel explained that the Fire Poison wizard and the Ice Lightning wizard were the most destructive. Also, that the Cerlic had the eternal power of light to help anyone that he or she chooses. Well, knowing adrian, he chose the Cleric. Suddenly just like he had felt when he was becoming a magician, the magic strength of eternal hollyness flowed through him like river rapids. He had another test, this one just two tests, Adrian had to go to the very top of Elinia, to find the sacred magic teacher that would transform him into a Cerlic. So Adrian set off, writing one last letter to his parents. He was climbing, falling, and traveling for days. Finally, on one somewhat cloudy day, he found the teacher, they discussed the powers and that his first test had been completed. Suddenly, Adrian felt very light-headed, like he was spinning, and then he was in a tree dome, with a strange background and even stranger monsters. So he collected the cores from the mosters as asked, and he left the strange dome, for the last time. The magic teacher gave him "Proof of a hero". That was to be taken to Grendel, and sadly, the way down was much harder then getting back up, because he kept on falling. He finally arrived on schedule, and gave the proof of a hero to Grendel. Grendel, being very pleased, gave Adrian his powers, he suddenly learned heal, holy arrow, invincible, bless, MP eater, teleport, and so on.

This time, years passed, he became a Priest, and a Bishop. He strained to learn spells like Genesis Obvlivion, Sentinel Arrow, Infinity, and Holy Chain. Upon receiving the news, he had just realized that Amos was under attack and they needed every Bishop they could find to help all the Heros, Paladins, and so on. Now, Adrian, not being very good at aiming, actually mananged to hit some of the enemies, thankfully. Then, something happened, Adrian was tossed off his feet and fell, and fell, and fell even further into the raging war. As soon as he came to conciousness, there was a blade heading directly at his now beat up heart...

And now reader, I bid you farewell, so what happened to Adrian you ask, mabye, in due time, I will tell you, but just like that blade that might "miss the target", well you never know, maybe I shouldn't leave this story covered and masked by a blade, so heres the ending...

...It poured down at him, and stopped. He layed down, confused, looking both ways with a frantic final decision, he saw the person who had stopped the blade. It was his father, the very man who was supposidly dead (which is probably why I didn't mention anything about his father). Adrian couldn't move, he had thought that he died and gone up to heaven, confused, he looked around, he was stll in that war, but his father was there to battle it out with him. He sucked in all his energy, Grendel had mentioned something about creating spells to help those whom need saving. Spells flashed through his head like a lightning bolt, strength poured out of him, he searched all his spells, and came up with one, very dangerous to cast and even more dangerous to be hit by, Genesis Apocalypse...

He knew how to cast it, but he didn't know if it would work, he needed his father's help. He needed more energy, apparently, his father read the expression on Adrian's face, he knew what to do. So the energy began to transfer, stronger and stronger Adrain became. He knew what he had to do and that the first part was finished. The sky and sound muted, the wind stood still, everything began to swirl into a form of slow-motion. Then, just like the roar of a lion, he screamed the spell in his elven language, a pool of light rushed under his feet and proceeded outwards. The clouds started to wither and shrink as brilliant sunlight poured through the clouds. Then, the pool of light returned to him, for just the three seconds. The three seconds of sanctuary that he held on to so dearly, but seconds come to an end. He felt the light become too strong to hold, it was rapidly slipping out of the field that he held onto so powerfully. At the third second, it slipped, he felt the light pour out of the field, now too powerful to hang onto, he was blinded, blocked by the eternal light that was to save the race of Amos, or destroy it...

He was on his knees crawling, trying to find a way out of it, trying to escape the deadly light, trying, trying, and somehow, succeeding. he found his way out, the light began to fade, it was almost an hour before his vision returned to him. So he lay there, hoping that no one had seen where he was, And just as the light returned to normal, as did his sight. It was like a grave yard, a vast, beautiful, and dangerous plain of souls that surrounded him. His father was gone, but somehow, Adrain knew that his father was watching from heaven with a proud smile on his face, saying to the other angels "Well what can I say, thats my boy..."

Well, and what happens next, dear reader, you might ask that, well Adrian grew up to be the heir of Elinia, and ruled with a mighty hand, having a wonderful wife and several children, his life would continue for a very long time in that peaceful town where wizards reigned. Now reader, you must take your attention off of this powerful wizard, for now, a little boy with a dream was just being born into a world with a raging war well on his way little did this boy know, he was to play an important part in a world called Amos...

So I guess the tale starts over again, but now, why don't you choose the ending before you leave this place of well being, this place where everything is possible, this little place I like to call Amos...

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1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?