SG_Antonella+A.

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: Hi, I am Antonella and I am thirteen years old, I'm from Lima-Peru. I study in Saint George's College in 8 grade, I like to go to the beach is one of my favorite places , i like to spend time with my friends and go to the cinema .My best friend is Cristina and we spend a lot of time together. =====

====Once upon a time there was a girl named Ashley and two girls named Samantha and Priscilla. Ashley was pretty ,but she was bad when she wanted. She insulted other girls telling she was the prettiest in the school and the others were horrible.====
 * ==Murder in the convent ==

She used to make Samantha and Priscilla cry.
Samantha and Priscilla were jealous of Ashley because she was pretty and they were not, but the problem with Ashley was that she knew she was pretty and she wanted everybody to knew it, humiliating other people.

They were tired of Ashley, she was always bothering them, so they decided to kill her so he couldn't annoy them anymore.

====The next day Samantha and Priscilla said to Ashley that they wanted to be her friend but it was a lie they only wanted to kill her so they took Ashley into the bathroom and killed her. All the blood was in the knife that Samantha stubbed in Ashley's stomach and heart it was really horrible, they didn't know what to do with the body so they decided to burn all her body and her clothes.====

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