BF-Arel

Hello, my name is Arel! i know when you click on my name it´s spelled arel, but actually, you have to put an exclamation mark at the end if you wanna spell it correctly. I live in barcelona this year and i love football (soccer). I come from san francisco, california. my favorite football team fc bayern munich from germany. bayern is playing against barcelona in the chmapions league and it is completetly obvious who will win : BAYERN!!!! :D oh, here is a very cool thing: (\_/) (=´.`=) this is bunny copy and paste bunny to help him gain world domination (´´) (´´) I really love soccer, but other things i love are, making videos, hanging out with friends, listening to rock music, playing guitar

oh, and just in case you havn´t noticed, I AM A BOY \m/(>.<)\m/ rock on ps my friends are probably saying that barça is very good, but we all know that bayern munich will be the champions of europe :D dont listen to gerard he is even more flipado than i am i have a vey awesome ethiopia jacket...it is very cool...i will later post a photo of it ñññññ¿?¿?¿ ÇÇÇÇÇbye 4 now!!!:D this photo was me in rapper clothes after carnaval where me and my friend samuel dressed up as rappers. When i got home i went on photo booth to relieve the moment

I replied to your thing on my page. Go and visit.

Bunny says read my story! (\_/) (='.'=) (") (")

My Story =Surf's Up in Liberia= "Dude! Thats a great idea!" said Back-Track exitedly. "I know man" said Zak. "Two whole months of nothing but surfing, sleeping, and hanging with the chicks." "I wonder why this is all happening. My guess is an awesome idea from yours truly" "Oh shutup Axel!" exclaimed Zak. "Amanda's not even here right now. There is no point in flirting with us."

"Connie!" Amanda said happily. "What!!!???!!! Im eating a burger! This better be good!!!". It is, it is, it is!!! Axel invited us girls to go on a two month long surfing safari on the west coast of Africa this summer. We´ll start in Senegal, then stop in every country along the way until we get to the Ivory Coast. Then, We´ll fly to Madrid, then New York, Then we´ll take a van home to Santa Cruz. Sound good?" "Well, it does sound really great! But who exactly is coming?" " Back-Track, Zak and .....<3 Axel <3 aaaahhhhhh ,Axel." "And then us two, so you mean, we'll be the only girls???" "No! of course not! Karmen! Duh!!" "Okay, but im sitting next to you on the plane." "Deal! now lemme call the guys, Karmen already is a definite.

5 days later, the friends were on Iberia Flight 7349 from Madrid to Dakar. "Are we there yet?" moaned Axel. "C'mon Axe! Give it a rest! Here, borrow my iPod. Don't worry, i downloaded all of the beach boys records i could find." replied Back-Track. "Sweeeeeeeet man!" said Axel, who then reached over the aisle to give Back-Track a highfive. "You're my saviour dude!"

30 days later

"Wow! Sierra Leon was the BOMB!" said Connie. "I cant wait for Liberia!" said Amanda. "Well lucky for you cause we're arriving in Monrovia in 15 minutes" said Karmen. "I wish they all could be California girls!!!" sang Axel happily. "Oh give it a rest dude! we've heard "Get Around" 16 times, "Fun Fun Fun" 23, and "Surfing USA" a record of 56 times!!!" said Connie "57 by count" responded Back-Track in a very bored and tired fashion. Everyone in the van turned their attention to the drivers seat as the 59 year old Frenchmen mumbled something. "I think that means we're almost there" said Connie. She was proven correct when Axel turned of his music and pointed out a sign that said "Bienvenue à Monrovia" (Welcome to Monrovia). "FINALLY!" exclaimed everyone in the van (except for Zak who had been asleep ever since they had got in the van on the border of Sierra Leon and Liberia).

the next day

"C'mon! lets hit the waves", was the vibe that overcame the entire hotel room. The smell of sunscreen everywhere (except for on Back-Track who came from South Africa and had dark skin), sand left in the bottom of the bag from the last beach outing (2 days earlier) spilled out of the bag all over the floor, and most importantly, Zak's scented surfboard wax that everyone used. In a half hour, they would be running out of the hotel with their surfboards under theirs sholders and lunch in baskets spread out between them.

"FLIP!" exclaimed Back-Track "This beach is off the chain!!! "C'mon! Lets hit the waves!" said Amanda. Back-Track was by far the fastest, and before anyone could blink, he was already 20 meters away from the shore. "Sortir de l'eau et à votre conseil d'administration de la surveillance!" were the words they heard being boomed in french out of loudspeakers. Karmen knew a bit of french and knew that it had something to to with getting out of the water and bringing your board to lifeguard. Although Karmen mostly knew what it meant, she figured that they were talking to someone else in the water, besides Back-Track, but she was proved wrong when she noticed that B-T was the only one in the water. They heard the voice again and B-T got out. Karmen told him to bring his board to lifeguard. He was sure that was a mistake when the guard took out some oil and matches. 5 minutes later Back-Track´s brand new board was nothing but ashes.

"Hey! What was that for?" The lifeguard replied ina thick french accent ; "Its illegal to surf here! read the signs!" "Dude no ones gonna stop THE Back-Track from surfing!" "Ummm, last time I checked, I just did." replied the life guard, clearly annoyed. As usual, Back-Track was not happy about that ;"Yo! I'm not leaving Liberia 'till i get a decent day of surfing so make sure the hotel is open. When it comes to surfing, i have NO mercy!" Back-Track was a semi Pro surfer back in California, and he didnt have a good temper when he couldnt surf. "I dont care if i need to surf on flippin' driftwood! I'm slicing whitewash, end of story." His friends pulled him away before things got ugly, but the next day, they were back on the beach.

"If I were you guys I wouldnt use your boards, you saw what happened yesterday with mine." Yeah i agree" said Axel "Driftwoods cool with me" said Zak "Awwwwwwwwwwww man! I just got a Mani-Pedi!" moaned Amanda "Watever Am, its your board." As soon as they were on the beach, Amanda joined the "No-Board club" with Back-Track and she just had to give up her pink toenails. Back-Track was satisfied with the driftwood, and so was everyone else (even Amanda who got absorbed into the surf) but their happiness was crushed when Karmen noticed a small splash in the water. Thay all looked at the shore and were shoked to see that 10 men wearing camoflage were actually shooting REAL guns at them. "What is up with these freaks!?!?!?!" Everyone dove off of their "boards" and used them as shields. They swam under their wood until the shore until tey were sure no one was shooting anymore. When they dragged themselvs onto the shore, still shaking from fear, all the shooters were gone.

"ENOUGH!" yelled Connie. She pulled out a necklace from under her shirt, in the shape of a surfboard, said a few words into them, then, everyone heard a bang. Everything was dark, then all the friends woke up inside of the hotel.

They decided to go look at the beach. When they got there, there were lots of people slicing the water and the sun was pouring down. This was surfing heaven!

THE END This is a really good story, i like it but you had some spelling ererors and you needed a couple comas in places too but other than that it was a good story. EDITED BY - Brian TRMS __good story it was very intersting i like how you talk about chicks

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Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

cool story homie!!