Amani



Hi, my name is Amani
**Siblings: 1 Brother**
 * Grade: 7th **
 * Best Holiday: Christmas **
 * Birth Month: June **
 * Career Goals: Designer **
 * Favorite Band(s): Paramore **
 * Favorite Food: Pizza **
 * Favorite Munchies: Chips **
 * Favorite Soft Drink: Smoothie **
 * Favorite Subject: Spanish **
 * Pet Peeve: Haters **
 * Pets: 1 Dog, 1 Cat **

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=Surprise.!? :O= = = = = =One day Asia was home with her sister Jackie while her mom Jennifer was on vacation for two weeks. After two weeks Jennifer called to tell she was on her way home, and Asia said “okay”. When their mother Jennifer came home Asia and Jackie were very happy. Asia and Jackie said to Jennifer “we missed you very much”. Jennifer unpacked her stuff and went to lie down. The next day Jennifer went to work, thinking about the family. Then while Jennifer was at work Joshua came to the house and Asia opened the door. Joshua asked “who are you” and she replied “your step daughter, Asia”. Later on they started talking and getting to know each other. After they were done talking, Joshua left to go visit Jennifer. Joshua told Jennifer that he was talking to her daughters. Jennifer was mad that they met but was happy that they got along.After a long day of work Jennifer went home to have some dinner. During dinner the family had a big discussion about the family. After dinner everyone went to sleep. The next morning Jennifer had a day off of work so she said, “today were going to have family day.” So Joshua came over and then the family went out. The family had a great day out. After everything was done they went home and it was really late so they didn’t have time to eat dinner. So then they just went to sleep. Then next day when Asia and Jackie went to school they told all their friends about family day they had yesterday. After school they went home and had a snack. Then the family went out to the movies since it was Friday and they had much more fun then yesterday. Now that the family is back together everything is good, everyone is together like a family, and everyone is happy.Tomorrow is Asia and Jackie’s last day of school. Everyone is very excited to go to their 10th grade graduation. Asia and Jackie just came home from school they are very tired after a hard day of school. Today is their graduation and everyone is excited to go. Asia was singing and Jackie had a solo on playing the clarinet. Jennifer recorded their great hard work. They were very proud of themselves. After the graduation they went to go eat upstairs in the school, they had mini cupcakes, cake, and sandwiches. Jennifer said to the teacher “everything is great.” When everything was finished they went home and went to sleep. They’re going to Puero Rico this summer to celebrate their hard work. After this summer its back school and everything starts all over again except the new step dad that was just a big innocent that wont happen again.=

=//The End// =

Questions for Peer Reviewers

1**. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?**


 * 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?**


 * 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?**

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 * 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?**
 * 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?**

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?