Terrance

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 * Hi, my name is: Terrance Tribble **
 * Grade:8th**
 * Best Holiday: Martin Luther King Day **
 * Birth Month: June **
 * Career Goals:TBA **
 * Favorite Band(s):don't like rock **
 * Favorite Food: Buffulo wings **
 * Favorite Munchies: oreos **
 * Favorite soft drink: Sprite **
 * Favorite Subject: Social Studies **
 * Pet Peeve: none **
 * Pets: none **

 Terrance Tribble Computers Pd.I Mrs. Cronk 3/18/09

One day this guy walked up to a kid named Josh. It was very dark and Josh was walking down the street. He was listening to his Ipod and then this character named Joey came out at then infected Josh and he became a zombie. Josh, a new zombie came down Elm Street were Freddy had kicked a dog into a pool. Josh came down the street and tried to eat Freddy. But Freddy ducked and kicked Josh into a pool. Then Josh saw the dog that Freddy kicked in the pool before. The dog then saw Josh and ate him. Then Josh got out of the pool and went to the KFC. He ordered the large box of chicken. He called Terrance to come and eat the chicken. Terrance came over and they were ready to eat the chicken. Terrance then saw a feather in the chicken. Terrance yelled and then called the KFC. Joey picked up the phone. He said he was going to come to my house and kick my dog. Joey than tried to get in Terrance’s house. But nobody was there and then Josh called Mike and Mike went to the KFC. He talked to this guy named Frank. Frank had been sick and he throws up on Mike. He was not happy so he took the hot box of chicken on Frank. Then he walked out and then Justin walked into the KFC and Frank throws up on Justin. Then Justin jumped across the counter and hit him. Then Joey came and he bit Justin and Justin got infected and turned into a zombie. Then Josh came and he wasn’t infected anymore because he was in water. So Terrance had to through ever one who was infected into water. Then this kid named JB came and said that he would help Terrance get the people uninfected. But then a car came and hit JB him. So Terrance went home and played 360 until JB came back and yelled at the TV because he did not like the show. Then he went outside and then was hit by a car. Then Terrance left town so he would not die. So then a dam broke and everybody died. Terrance was out of town and he was very said but he was happy in New York were thee were no zombies.

Questions for Peer Reviewers

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?