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**Hi my name is boyd**
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Gary VS the Field Here we are. Back in Daytona, Qualifying for the 2010 Daytona 500 Gary Longhorn Is now on track in his #89 Ford Fusion Another one of those last minute teams just brought up 3 or so weeks ago Around two minutes after, Gary qualifies 1st so far but he still has one more bullet to dodge until go or go homers are out Qualify a couple of minutes later Dale Earnhardt jr The man that was fastest in practice is out to qualify, 43 seconds later Gary just got knocked off the pole Qualifying run and Dale rises to the top. Around 15 minutes It is official Dale jr sits on the pole for the 2010 Daytona 500. Just moments before the race “Gentlemen start your Engines”!!! As the thunder rolls through out pit lane and onto the last parts of the front stretch into turn one 3 pace laps later. The pace car leading the field out of turn four pace car pulls off the track onto Pit road Dale jr and Gary Longhorn lead them to the Green Boogity boogity boogity let’s go Racing boys! The 2010 Daytona 500 is underway listen to the sound of thunder of the field diving into turn one Dale Jr leads the field. 196 lap’s later 5 laps to go Dale Jr leading. There has been 31 lead changes among 9 drivers, 8 caution flags for 36 lap’s now 2 laps to go jr still leads Brad Keselowski along side and Gary longhorn along side Brad. White flag! Last lap 46.3 seconds later, coming out of turn 4 to the checkers Brad Keselowski Wins the 2010 Daytona 500. There’s something, going on in Pit Lane Brad Keselowski and Gary Longhorn’s teams are fighting. I think Gary’s team thinks they should have won the race. And there goes Gary walking up to victory lane it looks like he might start a fight or something. No I think he’s just goanna trade a few words with Brad let’s go down to Dave Burns with our Winner. Well Brad you are the 2010 Daytona 500 Champion so were shall we start you made a guy mad for pretty much no reason, or you Win in your first ever Daytona 500. What do, you think he’s mad about Brad? “I think he’s just a little mad because he thought he had the car to beat and he got beat by less than half of a car length”. Now I just have to ask you first 500 hundred and you win it how does it feel? “Oh man it feels awesome to get this 25 team back to Victory Lane. The guys worked so hard on this car and it’s just it’s a great feeling”. Thanks Brad and Congratulations. We’re sorry we can’t seem to find Gary. I suppose he doesn’t want to talk. 34 races and two days later. Tuesday October 4th 2010. Tony Stewart wants a new member for his already two car team. He wants to make it three cars. So he goes and talks to Gary. Tony says Hey Gary, I Have a deal for you if you stop causing fights with every driver that beats you. I will give you a contract. Sign it and we’ll give you a car that will run up front, guaranteed. But you can’t start a fighting with every driver that beats you or else you will be put in the wall every race. It’s that easy. Do we have deal? We Have a deal says Gary. 5 days and 3 hours later. 2 laps to go in the Checkers auto parts 500 Gary Longhorn leads the field with a 3 second lead over Dale Jr. And Gary’s coming to the white flag. He just needs to take it smooth through turns 3 and 4. Coming out of turn four the 3rd first time winner in 2010, Gary Longhorn will go to victory lane in phoenix. It took 35 starts to find victory lane but he will win the 2010 Checkers Auto parts 500. And Gary never caused a fight again.

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1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?
 * Your plot is original but could use some work. Give more details and explain the event and characters alittle more.**
 * The problem of the story is odd. I have some problems with understanding what is happpening in your story. At the end I understood what happened but it was still odd.**
 * Your characters are some what realistic. You need to explain the characters more.**
 * I think you could use more details and explanations other wise the stroy is not all that bad.**
 * As I said just explain what happened more and you will be great.**