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MOSCANAITORS THE REBELLION =====

In the year 2018 there was an evil army of robots with frog parts, they were call “Frobots”, this robots have metal parts that resist water, acids and others substances.

The “Frobots” had like prisoners the Mosc, they were like flies but with human parts like arms, legs, etc. They were a group of aliens of “YAGUR 5”, the name where they lived. 5950 miles away the "frotopian" island was a camp of the resistance call “moscanaitors”. In this camp they were protected from the Frobots.

In the fabric of the Frobots a spy was caught, it was too late when they were attacked and many Frobots died. They were strong and they would resist until death, so they prepared themselves, they built guns, knives and new robotic parts, but that was not enough.

In the midle of the W.W.VI that means world war four half of both groups died, because of that, the Frobots punished the Moscs and they were their slaves, but they didn't throw the towel and continued fighting. The captain of the Moscanaitors left a note in a Frobot.

"31/12/2019 All my soldiers have died, I am the only one alive... But I am going to survive I don't know how but I am going to survive despite all the things that had happened and despite I don't have special powers anymore. I am going to destroy the fabric and liberate my family and all the Moscs."

Three years later, the Moscs recovered his planet of the control of the Frobots because they were slaves, but they couldn't forget that day, the day of war when many Moscs died. THE END By: Giorgio sampietro. 

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