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**Hi I'm Brenda Belevan, I am 13 years old my birthday is in January 17. I live in Surco, also I study in Saint George school, I learn some interesting things like the curse of English because Miss Ursula is the best! . My hobbies are to listen music, chat in messenger, play some games in internet, and see movies.** ===== **I like to create ghost stories, so I hope you like my story. Thanks... Brenda**

**Ghost Village**
__By: Brenda Belevan__

Once upon a time there was a mysterious village. It was mysterious because some of the people that lived there said that in that village existed many ghosts. There were many legends of supernatural events.

One day De Vill's family went to that village. De Vill's family believed that people that lived in the village were humans as in any other village but they didn't know that they were ghosts. When De Vill's family discovered the ghosts, they were scared of that they wanted to leave the house they bought only because of that reason. De Vill's family had a good time in this village, they told to the people about their plans of their next trip but they didn't know that before those plans all the members of the family would be killed, one per day.

First, the youngest member of De Vill's family, Richard. He liked candies very much so a bad woman offered him a delicious chocolate and because the candy was poisoned Richard died. He was poisoned with a strange substance.

The second member died and later their parents died because one day they discovered that Richard had dissapeared and they went to the forest to look for him but they didn't find him, only an evil man who wanted to kill them and he did it.

We don't know about the killers, it is a mysterious case that the police hasn't solved yet. No one has solved this case because they don't have clues, they only know that there is criminal who is still in the streets.

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** __Questions for Peer Reviewers__ **
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.) 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?