SG_Joshua+G.

__**Introduce yourself**__

I am JOSHUA GREEN


 * __Publish your story__**

Story of a dragon  There was an ancient story that tells about a huge town were a dragon ate people and animals, but one day the citizens prepared a trap to kill the dragon, they made a hole near a mountain and they put a huge rock on top of the mountain to cover the hole with the dragon inside. At night the dragon started eating animals in some farms but the dragon wasn’t full so when he saw the hole with the sheep he flew quickly but he didn’t have time to eat anything, and the people that were supposed to drop the rock when the dragon was inside the hole, dropped it before, and the dragon saw that and moved before the rock smashed him, the dragon was angry and the trap didn’t work.

While they were running, the dragon was throwing fire and destroying buildings, even though the military army were there it was impossible to stop the dragon. One day passed and most parts of the city were destroyed and desolated. Just a few citizens were alive. They were very afraid even soldiers didn’t want to fight with the dragon. The dragon was injured by some arrows. After a few days, the dragon decided to return to the coty and finish with them forever and ever.

The soldiers and the dragon fought until dead. In the last moment when there were just a few soldiers a young kid threw an axe from a tree splitting on the dragon’s neck and ending forever the bloody battle.

Joshua Green 8th Middle

__ **Questions for Peer Reviewers** __
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.) 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?