ISKL+Alistair

** Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.  Hello, my name is alistair. I love playing soccer and rugby. I like to ride my wave board and bike around my complex. I like to go to the movies and theme parks with my friends. My favorite TV Show is... The Simpsons. My favorite food i think is the spicy chicken that they sell for lunch at ISKL. ITS SO SPICY!!! My favorite video game is guitar hero. i enjo going to my friends house to play it. (Nick)

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 * April 14, 2009 Humanities Alistair Jones Global Warming One day a boy named Jhonny joins the after school activity called “Planet Savers” But his friend Bonny said “ Don't do the after school activity. It sounds so stupid and a waste of time.” Jhonny is scared that his friend wont think he's cool or not be his friend. If he does the activity. So he decides not to. But then a week later the schools trash is pilling up to a huge amount. So Jhonny begins to worry about “Global Warming” Then he came up to a sign that read “about 1/3 of the animals that we have today will be extinct! UNLESS WE DO SOMETHING ABOUT!” Jhonny thought about what it said but then left it alone. And went on to the bus to go home. As he gets home his parents ask him about “Global Warming” because of a message that they read in the Friday Flash. Jhonny began to worry a lot because some of his favorite animals will die from global warming. And Jhonnys dad works for a company that is trying to reduce the amount ogf garbage in the wrold by “Reducing, Recycling and Reusing.” The next day Jhonny finds out that bonnys dad has a jod that makes gas for the cars and others stuff that uses gas. So Jhonny asked Bonny “why his dad choose that job if he new it will kill endangered species. So now Jhonny is furious and goes to Bonnys dads office after school. and starts to come plan about his job and what he does. Again Jhonny asks the same question that he asked Bonny and his dad answers “Because its not goning to damage my life time. So i dont care!” At that point Jhonny is on his toes he is so red faced furious. After that Jhonny growing to become a person pretests against the causes of Global Warming. And now he is trying to save the earth. So grow up to save the planet not just do what you want because “its not in my life time” Do it for your children. SAVE THE EARTH**=====

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? I think that the plot was good but you should read threw it and look for errors. 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? I think the problems were good how he wanted to stop global warming. But you should maybe right what the charectors wear. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?