SO-Brandon+N.

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favorites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.

**Paste your story here:**
I cannot write about anything because I am writistically challenged. I don’t know what to write, and i can't write. Ummm… okay. I don’t know. Boredom fills my head and body. I‘d rather be doing fun things, like skateboarding or playing guitar. The vibration of the board rolling feels awesome. The board I’m riding is all scraped off. It used to say Crown. It got scraped off by doing stalls/lip tricks, and grinds. I would do this at Kieran’s house, on his cement stairs. All I can do right now is an Ollie, 180 Ollie, pop shove it, heel flip. I can do some grinds, like 50-50, 5-0, and board slide. I’m trying to do some other tricks like, kick flip, impossible which is impossible, and a wall ride. Besides skateboarding I like to play guitar. My favorite guitar is a Gibson Les Paul, I currently have a G & L s-500, it is like a Fender Stratocaster, but better lol jk. The Gibson Les Paul can get up to like 4000 dollars. In my room I play guitar to write my own songs then when I start writing something good I take it downstairs to my amp to get better on the song then before I know it I have another song. Right now I have about 15 songs enough for a cd lol I don’t have words for all of them yet though so I got to keep thinkin’.

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
haha nice writstically challenged... are you actually writstically challenged from your bff - Alaina:) haha.... //writistically challenged?// you sent that to me on an email. :) ~janette wow cool story real nice-kyli :-} (Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?