BF-Isabel

Hi! Im Isabel, Im 11 years old. Im from Sao Paulo, Brazil. Its been a year and a half that I live in Spain and I really like it here!! Before I moved to Spain I lived for 4 years in Kiev, Ukraine, and before that, I lived in Brazil for 7 years. I love fashion, traveling, dancing, movies, and converse. I also love tigers, pandas, and french bulldogs! I dont have any pets, well I might have 2 if you count fish. I have an older brother that is 18 years old, and he is graduating this year. Hes going to university in England.I have family in Australia and in Argentina. My first language is Portuguese, then English, and Im ok at Spanish!! Summer is my favorite season!! I love the sun, the beach and swimming. I really like going on the computer and going on facebook. Im quite a good swimmer but Im still learning to play tennis... My nickname is Isi, and I would prefer it in anyone called me that! My favorite colors are black and red. Im a shopaholic but Im not a poshy type of person!! I love making stupid jokes and laughing about them!! Ive read the Twilight Saga and I LOVED it!! Im pretty much obsessed with Twilight and Robert Pattinson!! I have brownish blackish hair. I have tanned skin and big eye lashes, My eyes are chocolate brown. I have small lips, but Im not really tall..... :( I also forgot to say that Im clausterphobic! And I love facebook!! My account is Isabel Tete, even though thats not my last name!! Add me but please just tell me who you are cuz orelse i might not know, and i wont accept. xxx xx x Isi P.S. Bad picture below but I guess just for people to have an idea of what I look, its ok!



=Mafia, This is Why You Shouldnt Mess With It!= = =

==It was a cold and lonely day in Sidney, and Audrey hated walking back home, she always felt so alone but at the same time with so much company, but she knew it was for hers and her loved mothers sake not to waste any money on the school bus, since her mum might lose her job on the National Bank of Australia, for they would be left alone without food in the gutters. Today as the January strong winds blew on her face, she got a feeling that something bad would happen, something unspeakable, something that would never be forgotten. For some reason she remebered her mother's cold desperate words " It takes a minute to like some one, an hour to love some one, but a lifetime to forget some one." School was a great day so Audrey thought she was just tricking her mind with the idea of some thing in her life finally be worth living for. Audrey couldn't wait to get home, today was Wednesday, muffin day for her! The day when she got to eat soft and moist crunchy banana muffins.== ==When Audrey got home her mum wasnt there, so she thought to herself, "It must be saying that mum went to the supe- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" she interrupted herself. Acording to the letter she found on the desk, her mum had been kidnapped, and if she wanted her mum back, Audrey had to bring 50,000 dollars to " The haunted building" as she called it on Libury Street. She had many options but she couldn't decide which was more ethical, which would be safer and more humane. But it also said, that Audrey couldnt bring anyone with her, that she must come alone. In the quick panic of a second Audrey did not do the most ethical thing but instead the thing you think is humane. udrey decided to go to the place where her skin goose bumped and her bone clenched just to make sure her mum was really there, and then tell evil foes that she would bring the money later, evn though she was just trying to spare time to recover the itsiest bitsiest bits of a master mine plan! Audrey left home, and 5 minutes later, she caught a taxi to take her to the place where she believed her fate lied, she went inside the building trembling, as if she were wearing a tanktop in Antartica. As she approached the dark building with pieces of the wall falling off and rats everywhere, the smell of pestisides filled the warm musty air. "Mum,are you in here?" No answer. Audrey went inside the room, but there lying on the floor was her mum. There was a note on the top of her chest that said, " She deserverd to die. No one messes with the Mafia." Mafia?......, well Muffin day was over, that was the only thing she was sure of. Tears ran down her face in despite of her mother. Foer she had decide that no longer would her fate be controlled for she was to have revenge...==

Story Creation
In class, create your story based on your teacher's directions.
 * Starting - March 15 (2009)**

**Story and Content**
1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? I think the story was very original with detail and excitement. 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? the tesion was unberable and the ending could be changed. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?
 * Starting - March 29 (2009):**

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? the story was very clear.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? the ending.

Story Creation
In class, create your story based on your teacher's directions.
 * Starting - March 15 (2009)**

**Story and Content**
1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? This plot is very original and it was very suspenseful. 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? I was wondering if this was all you are planning to write. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? the characters are definitely life like and do help the story. 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?They do help me hear and expierience the story
 * Starting - March 29 (2009):**

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? The beginning of the story could use a little improvement.