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**Hola! my name is Markee. Cool name huh? Well I think so. I have dark brown hair and ice blue eyes. Something different about me is that my eyes change color by my mood. I am excited to be talking to people from other parts of the world. I think its awesome! I am in french immersion and I love it! I am pretty tall girl and because I am tall I play basket-ball. It is fun. Atleast I think so. Canada is a beaut**
 * iful place and LOVE it here. My favorite subjects are science and math. When I grow up i want to be a crime scene investigator. (criminologist) Things that I like to fo are shop, swim, basket-ball, movies, and solve small crimes. (lol) My least favorite vegetable is squash. My favorite fruit is coconuts. They are delicious! Well thats a bit about me and i really look forward to communicating. Au revoir. Ciao. Bye!!!!!**

Changes

My life changes everyday. Sometimes changes are needed and others are unneeded. Changes happen to the best of us that are not really the best. An example of these changes would be a death, loss of a pet or a tragedy. A good change would be something like a raise at work, a new job or maybe a gain of something new. I am going to tell you the story of Angel.

Angel is a normal girl. Well, somewhat normal girl. The only thing different about Angel was that she hated changes. She never associated with anybody because she thought that they would **__change__** their mind and leave her behind, friendless, and all alone. Why does she think this way, well because she never gave it a chance. Angel does not like going to the grocery store because she always brings 142.47, just enough for her groceries but she is always scared that the price will change or that they will not have the right amount of green grapes for her. Their is things in life that Angel missed out on because of her fear of change.

Angels mother thought that she needed to go to a therapist to get over her fears but, Angel said no because she was afraid that the therapist would be bad man and not want to help her. She eventually did go to therapy because she thought twice but before she left, she told her mom that if anything had happened to her, she would never leave the house.

As Angel walked into the stuffy office, a tall bulky man greeted her with a hello. Angel set her things down and twiddled her thumbs and lokked at the walls. Angel got clamy because she never had been in this office before and was scared. Angel jumped as the door slammed with the man infront of it. After a long talk, you could hear nothing but giggles coming from the office. When Angel walked out with a smile on her face ready to make some changes, it had seemed like she went and erased her fears and was ready to start all over.

Angels mother had been waiting on her arrival.When Angle returned she was a different person. She came home at ten that night instead of seven. She also came home with chinese take-out and a tiny chihuahua puppy. Angels mom was astounded by the fact that she had made all of these changes in less than five hours. Angel brought in several bags filled with paint,stencils and fuzzy furniture. Angels mom was going to faint she wanted to scream but considering that htere was a chihuahua, she took back her thoughts. The next day Angel was waiting to get up and re-decorate everything in her house from the arches on the bed to the zuchini magnets on the fridge. She was finallly going to change everything.

Three months had passed and the changes that had blown her mother away, were not there forever. Only because Angel got over her fear of change and wanted to change as much as she could in every living moment. Angel mede friends and started talking to the people on the street with a friendly hello. When Angelw ent to the grocery she brought her bank card because she got what she wanted. Angel thanks her mother every day for making her go tot herapy and never regrets it any waking moment in her new life.

The moral of this story is that you should not let change hold you back from what you like to do. Angel loves her life and is dissapointed that she never went to therapy sooner. So what if your descision changes things go for it and never hold yourself back. Be like Angel, try something new.

The plot was very original and creative. The only problem that I had with the story was that there wasn't enough details and it didn't pull me into the story, making me not want to read more. I like the theme of your story as well but your story could have been longer and maybe had some dialogue. The character, Angel is very interesting but maybe there could be more details about her.