BF-Cata

 ==My name is Catalina Cruañas Pániker, I live in Barcelona and I go to this school called BFIS. I have 9 horses, it is very cool to have them, but it takes a lot of work! I wish to have a dog though :) I was born in Barcelona too. For my nickname you can call me Cata. I have a house in Barcelona and a house in Canet, Sant Gregori, Girona, Catalunya, Spain. My friends describe me as: fun, shoulder length brown hair and big brown eyes, tan, etc...I have no brothers, no sisters!!!!!! But on weekends when I go to Canet, with my horses I treat them as my brothers and sisters! :)I do tennis and hip-hop==

. My best friends are Aina Tomás, Blanca Piera, and Daniela Casta.
Daniela Casta:Blanca Piera:Aina Tomas:

These are some of my horses:

This is my story: Confessions of a Natureholic

Saturday 21, March, 2009 Dear Diary, My name is Mary Smith and this is my sister Ellie Smith, we are both 30 years old. Today we went to the Botanical Center at Boston. In the center we went to the flower pot station. There we bought two big squared flower pots to put in my room. Then we bought some ivy and some ferns for my wall. Then we bought three bonsais, one was a willow tree another was an oak tree and the last was a cypress tree. Then we bought some stones with mold on it, but we also bought a special product to make the mold grow on other things!!! Sunday 22, March, 2009 Dear Diary, Today we reorganized our house for it to be completely a forest!!!! Ellie's room was like a rainforest. When she tried to liedown on her bed she had to go through five vines and a gigantic leaf. One day she found a frog under her pillow. Her shower was covered in mold, and her night lamp was also covered in mold. On the legs of her chair and of her table grew some ferns around the legs. You couldn't barely see the ceiling. Beside her bed she had a big precious hibiscus.

My room was a normal forest, where all the bonsais whent. My night lasmp was camouflaged with the cypress bonsai. A big pine tree went through the hole on the roof. All the floor was covered in grass with flowers. On my work table grew some ivy up the wall, it covered all the wall. My room also had some little pine trees, and the oak bonsai was in the bathroom. The back of my seat was the trunk of a small palm tree.

June 25th, Monday, 2009 Today Me and Ellie, found a problem, with our forests. In Ellies room we found a family of frogs, of course that was a problem because they kept on having babies and at the end our home full with frogs. We couldn't keep them there, I can´t stand them. Every single night you can hear them croaking, and they croak as loud as ever. At the end we had to give them to a zoo. That was only one problem! So wait for more...

June 26th, Tuesday, 2009 Today Ellie found a wood pecker on my pine tree! It had a nest there with his babies! Of course we had the same problem that we had with the frogs, they were too loud. Every night I heard: "Tac, Tac, Tac, Tac." every two minutes: "Tac, Tac, Tac, Tac." and more and more.

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? made it longer 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? i liked it it felt like i was there 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? way too short 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? loonger more detail 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? i liked it but longer more detail and i'm sorry if i'm harsh you can live