HA-James

"Yes" Jacko yelled.
 * !!BANG!! Winston booted the footy up the corridor from Centre Half Back into the forwardline. We were loosing by 3 points. OOOMMMFFFTTT The ball thumped into Jacko's chest. Jacko went back to take his kick. BBBOOOTTT!!! Jacko kicked it as far as he could BBBAAARRRMMMPPP!!! the siren went the ball just snuck behind the post. We all went wild.

The next day the whole team went to Jacko's house

Did you edit my story? Did you say you hated it? It was you right? Look, I'm sorry, but dude, this story is too short, it has no descriptions and it doesn't make any sense. If you're not finished...well, you should have already, seriously. And if you hate my story...well...compare to yours seriously!! I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW MAD AND IMPRESSED I AM RIGHT NOW...**