ISKL+Anya

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame. ** Hello, My name is Anya and I am British-Indian. I was born in London but I only stayed there for three months. I also lived in Sri Lanka and Singapore. Now I live in Kuala Lumpur. I have only one younger sister and I had a dog for two months. I love olives ** **, pasta and crepes. I love Swimming. I hate vinegar. **

**Paste your story here:**
Deforestation

One more crash and the workers had cut another fresh forest tree down. The forest was slowly disappearing and the plantations didn’t seem to care much about the sorrowful animals who have to adapt to this environment. Half the forest has already been chopped down.

I gathered my best friends to my house and we made a plan ask the principal of our school if he would let us hang up posters around our school. Maybe we could make movies to alert people about the dangers of deforestation. Inform them to cut down on their usage of palm oil.

We started by researching about what supplies depend on palm oil and wrote about them on our giant posters. We worked and worked to stop them but they are still not listening. I guess it is about the money to these people. As we made more posters and movies we made more progress. More and more people have changed their minds about buying palm oil products.

Now the government has shut down all palm oil factories in the town.

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? I think this plot is different from others I have read and is a little uncreative. Expand this story and make it more creative.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? The problems she faced had no suspense,no tension but a little interest. The solution was good the climax was also good. Nothing can be added except to make it more exciting.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? The characters are very life-like but they are not that enjoyable. I really did not get a good sense of the character from the description, dialogue and characters description. But I did from narrators opinion.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? I did not hear or experience the story I would like to see more action.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? I think you should improve the excitement say the the trees were dieing it made me sick I needed to do somthing about it I just had to. Make it more exciting.