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**Hi! my name is Giuliana, I am 13 years old and I like to dance and I love to swim. I don't like so much the animals only the horses and the dolphins.I traveled to New York 2 years ago but I want to travel to more cities in USA but the country that I really want to go is Australia, I think that is interesting ;also, have a very nice sea .I have only one sister. I like to be with my friends and also i like to go to cinema with them. I really want to become a famous actress.I love the salads and some fruits.** ===== **I hope that you like my story!**


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**The confusing life of Ashley**


There was a girl called Ashley who was confused between two guys - one was her friend's cousin, Matthew; and the other was one guy of her grade, Charlie. She was so confused that she needed Amy's help, Matthew's cousin. The next day Ashley asked Amy what was going on and Amy started to understand, so she gave Ashley the advice she required.

Ashley started to think things well and she realised that she had to decide for Matthew or Charlie. Matthew was so cute but Charlie was the guy of her dreams for three years (obviously before she met Matthew). Ashley decided that she would be in love of Matthew because he was cute and a nice person. Amy talked to Ashley and she asked about her decision. Ashley talked and Amy was happy because was her cousin liked her best friend. All was so nice and cool when one day one girl of the school told Ashley that Charlie was beating her up, because he knew about who she liked. Ashley was afraid but also interested to know why he was angry with her.

Some months later Ashley realised that Charlie was in love of her.

She was very nervous because she didn't like Charlie anymore. Ashley knew about that and she talked to him. She said to Charlie: "Charlie, what is going on with you ?" Charlie: "I am in love with you" Ashley: "but... but my feelings have changed, I am not in love with you anymore" Charlie: "But you can try..." Ashley: (nervous) "No, I can't try. I was in love with you for about three years" Charlie: "You see, you can be in love with me again" Ashley: "Ermmm" Charlie: "I am crazy about you" Ashley: you know what this conversation has to end here, ok?! Charlie: No !! I love you ♥ (Ashley run away from Charlie) They didn't talk during the holidays.

(The next year) Matthew entered to the same school as Charlie and Ashley, she was so happy but Charlie was angry. The second day Amy, Ashley & Matthew were together at all time, they became best friends. Matthew started to meet Ashley more and the next term he asked Ashley to be his girlfriend so Ashley said yes because she was in love of him and they were the happiest couple in the world.

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(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.) 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?