SG_Alejandro+A.

**Hi, my name is Alejandro Arriarán, I am a student from Saint George college in Lima-Peru. My favorite sports are basketball, swimming and American Football. My favorite school subjects are English, and Physical Education. Also I like going to the cinema and I like to listen rock and Pop music and finally my favorites dishes are lasagna and pizza.**

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 * It was cold outside; we were in a scientific laboratory at the Antartic. I was taking part of an expedition in a laboratory. We went to the Antartic to find more penguins and sea lions species. We sent a small group of three people; they were Michael, John and me. 9:00 A.M, Monday 20 of September of 2016.** **At the expedition we were transported by a sledge of eight Siberian dogs. When we were driving the sledge, most of the dogs were tired and we needed to walk, we walked for about three hours.**=====

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 * 2:00 P.M, Monday 20 of September of 2016.** **Three hours later we stopped to study these new species and decided to return to the laboratory because we also were tired. Meanwhile, at the laboratory the other group of 5 people informed us that a devastating storm was about 200 km behind us.** **3:00 P.M, Monday 20 of September of 2016.**=====

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 * Suddenly, we needed to return to the place where we left behind the dogs, so we began to run, but when John was running, he fell down to a hold of 5 meters, he said that we must continue running and left him behind, we wanted to save him but we didn’t have the tools to save him. Unfortunately, we left him behind.**=====

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 * 4:00 P.M, Monday 20 of September of 2016.** **As we left John behind, we arrived at the place where the dogs stayed. Suddenly, we got prepared to drive the sledge, at the driving, the security belt of Michael broke and he fells out of the sledge and he died.**=====

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 * 7:00 P.M Monday 20 of September of 2016** **The storm ended and we stopped the expedition and finally, we returned home. Few days later, we appeared at the news of many countries saying the tragic expedition and the new species of sea lions and penguins found.** **THE END.**=====

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