Max

**Siblings:1 brother**
 * **Hi, my name is Max **
 * Grade: 7**
 * Birth Month: November **
 * Career Goals: Doctor **
 * Favorite Movie: X-Men 3 the last stand **
 * Favorite Food:Pizza **
 * Favorite Snack: Oreo **
 * Favorite soft drink: Sprite **
 * Favorite Subject: Math **
 * Pet Peeve: Studying **
 * Pets: 1 dog several fish **

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The Viking Lord was walking out side as he doses everyday. When suddenly he saw something glowing in the distance. It came closer and closer until it was clear what it was. It was a huge group of rebels led by Archane the Rebel lord. It was known everywhere the Archane was bringing up a group of rebels but no one ever thought that it would be this big. In fact it had enough people to be able to stand up to a modern day army. The lord knew what to do. He grabbed his Blade of glory and ran into battle.=====

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He told all of his followers “Prepare for battle. All how wish to join grab any armor and weapons available in the army chamber and follow me to battle!!!” And with that he headed to the battlefield to await the arrival of his brother, Archane, and that entire wish to fight with him and against him. Just then out of the sky flew in angels. They said “you have as many soldiers as Archane. So the only problem is fighting your brother; my lord”. This worried the Viking Lord because his brother was always better at sword fighting than him. But he decided to put the thought away and device a plan to beat his brother.=====

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After all the soldiers have gather he noticed a horse coated in gold running toward them. A young well-built man dismounted from the horse and said “Father I am here to defeat the menus that wishes destroys the tranquility that had been with us for thousands of years”. With that he pulled out from under his cloak an indestructible suit similar to the one he was wearing and handed it to his father.=====

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The Lord quickly changed into his tunic and sped off into battle. Not long after he ran into battle he met his brother and his army. The lord’s army went into battle without command. Then within hours all other warriors were dead except the lord, his son, and Archane and within seconds the son dropped dead. Then when the lord was pinned down the son dying with every second drew his sword and severed the head of Arcane. The war was over.=====

Questions for Peer Reviewers

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? Well, the story was interesting and creative, thinking about the times of Viking but you could have written more. You could have described more at the last paragraph and be more specific. So you can write some more and be more specific. 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? There are climaxes that satisfies me, which is the first paragraph, going straight into the story. There are enough suspense, tension or interest in this story, though. The resolution is satisfying but could be more written in the end. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? The characters are not really likable or enjoyable. We don't really get a good sense of character from this story at all. Story's ending was sad and this story was about a war so we don't really get a good sense of character. They are life-like because it really tells about a possible story in the very old days. 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? It helps me to see and hear and experience the story. I would like to see the details of reaction of the characters and the fight between Viking lord's army and Rebel lord's. 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? This story need to most improve on the description of the main parts. This story finishes simply, needing much more work to do. So you can describe the whole point more, especially the main parts.

ISKL Min

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? ||