SG_Gonzalo+N.

**__Introduce yourself__ **
Hi! I'm Gonzalo, I'm 13 years old. I like to play Football and to do Skate and Down Hill. I have 2 brothers one call Vasco and the other Daniel. I like to talk with my friends all the time. In my freetime I practice Football or Skate.

**__MLK__**
This is a story about a famous group of rock called **__MLK. T__**he group was formed by 5 people Alfredo (vocals), Rodrigo (guitars), Titi (drums), Duff (bass), and Izzy (guitars) of the group. It was founded in 1975, the group recently began to sound in the'80s, when MLK travelled to Los Angeles they played Hard Rock for many years, but not all was happiness and success for the band. When they were in the top of the world of Rock & Roll their popularity began to decrease very fast and this was because of all the band members went partying with women and taking drugs such the famous phrase says: "sex, drugs and ROCK & ROLL."

For over 20 years the group remained in that way. During that time Alfredo, the singer, met a young man named Floripondio that became a very close friend of him and taught him a better way to live his life, without drugs and parties so that he could transmit to the group that and achieve a change. Unfortunately, that did not work and nobody wanted to hear about them anymore.

The group announced their break up, and had a last tour. The band was followed by millions of fans around the world, the concerts were held in 8 different cities: Los Angeles, Lima, Tokyo, Paris, Toronto, Buenos Aires, Miami and Madrid. The tickets were gone in about 5 hours after they announced their concerts. All tickets were sold out and it was the highest record sales worldwide.

After having spent 5 years of separation Alfredo became a solo artist and he is now one of the best singer of the world, he still has many followers and despite the fame and the money, he remains the same and he was not influenced by bad moments. Now he has his own reality show on television and he is looking for a love with which he can spend the rest of his life. Alfredo lives a life full of luxuries and great moments. . . Ah! I forgot what this story is true I witnessed it. . . by the way my name is Floripondio. 

**__Questions for Peer Reviewers__ **
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.) 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?