SO-Bryant+K.

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favorites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame. My name is Bryant Knutson and I like to play soccer and play kickball outside. I like soccer so much that started soccer when I was a little kid about 3 or 4 years old. My favorite T.V. show is soccer, football, and baseball. I want to visit my grandma in Florida and I also want to go to my grandpa in Auston, Minnesota. My future plans are to become a famous soccer player and my dad wants me to buy him a very nice house big enough to fit the whole family in there. To be a famous soccer player.

**Paste your story here:**
** The Invisible Cave **
 * By: Bryant Knutson **

One night there was a boy named Billy he likes to stay up late at night. One night Billy went to the bathroom and then he came back and heard a noise that sounded like rocks being scattered every where. Billy went to go look out side and see where the noise came from but Billy saw a raccoon and went back to his bed. Then Billy heard the same noise a gain and then Billy looked back out and then Billy saw a person walking into the fence. Then Billy said quetly,"Look out your about to hit the fence." The stranger didn't hear the Billy and then when the stranger was about ten feet to the fence Billy closed his eyes and then when Billy looked the stranger was gone. In the morning his mom said,"Billy come down and eat your breakfast before school." Billy went down stairs and then he asked his mom,"Hey mom did you hear a noise outside. ** To be continued….. **

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?