ISKL+Ganesh,+Young+Min

=Introduction=

Story idea (Aaron & Ganesh) Title: Witch Hunt Setting: Year 1500 Characters:, Black Cat Problem: The humans have been upset and now want to kill the witch On a dark stormy night as the wind howled, In a small cottage on the outskirt of the forest a black glowing furred cat hoped upon the lap of an old and wrinkly woman. “My, the humans have found out that you are a ” says the cat by the name of Sir Nickles “What should we do?” He asked “Fear not my trusted friend I have a plan” said the old woman. She stood there with a long hat and a flowing black robe. As wrinkly as her face was there was no sign of evil or hatred but only a unreadable expression. "Let us pack up the kit, and anything else important." "It is time for the humans to feel my wrath. " "I have tolerated their insults for the last time!" She walked over and picked up a glass bottle with herbs in it. The crazy horde of people gather their pitch forks, and any other weapon they could hold and came yelling” Down with the, down with the .” They soon enter the outskirts of the forest where they lived. "They have weapons ." replied the silky black cat. Do not worry about me my perish cat. I have sunk Atlantis and destroyed the filthy Dinosaurs from this world. I think I can take on a bunch of measly humans. How will you accomplish this task? Is it in a gruesome manner asked Sir Nickolas. Oh no, Helga said I will be doing it in a much more fun way. Open my kit and release the soul within it. The picked up her wand and cast a spell upon the door. Open you evil hag ,open it now! However right on that second the top of the cottage caught on fire. The evil sprung out yelling. Foolish Humans you have upset me and I will end you. She fled into the night`s sky laughing all the way on a broom stick. About 2 km. from this event the saints of the nearby village gathered the net for catching the. They hung it across two huge oak trees and stood there. The however had no idea about this. As she produced she saw the ghostly like saints.With their long flowing white robe and majestic like look they stared up at her eyes.Caught on this delay she slammed into the net and came tumbling to the earth. Your time is up. Came a harsh voice. Capture them and chain them up. Keep the wretched beast away from me. She is a creature from Hell!

As soon as the fell, the contents of the kit spilled out and poured straight into the net. All the s were caught up in the net and the humans took the net and put it in a box and locked the up in a dungeon. The was unconcious from her fall and did not realize that she had been captured. Unfortunately, her pet cat had escaped and went into the forest to gather subjects of the to turn on the village and help the escape They all gathered in the dark of the night to come up with a plan. They were worried that the humans would release the net of s on them so they wanted to steal it from them before they went after the.

When the woke up she was filled with fury and began screaming at the top of her lungs. She tried to use her powers to get out of the dungeon but she had none. The was afraid that she had become a human and got even madder. She refused to eat or drink or talk to anyone..

In the middle of the night a harsh cry came from the dungeon, not the normal scream which the witch made, this was more like a cry of help. The gaurds hurried toward the dungeon. As they enter the filthy ditch. There was no witch. The guards stared around. The plate in which her lunch was remained the same. There were rats scurrying, the rusty chain` s just swagging to the breeze. The moonlight lit the dungeon. The guards began to look around. There was no indication in where the witch could have gone. Billy the guard realized something. He stared in the corner of the room. Out of no where the witch sprang out. She bit the poor man. Yes she bit him, and then punched him. The other guards ran toward the witch. However the witch was prepared. She grabbed billy`s spear and killed the other two guards. She charged toward the main hall of the prison. Bang, Bang came the bell sounding the escape of the witch. However the bell became muted the moment it started. As the witch peered into the bell tower she could see the fight between the man-wolf and the bell master. The gates of the prison brust open. All of the demons from hell were awaken and charging forward. As the battle between good and evil continued the cat Sir Nickolos. "Shall we mistress?". "No!" I want all of them killed!" she shrieked, All of a sudden the witch went into a trance, she began to burn the village. As the demons ran toward the woods the witch went after the king preist. As she ran from roof top to roof top, She jumped into the church. The other preist saw her and began to charge. With a flick of a finger they were turned into a toad. She was shivering with rage. As she ran toward the high preist he too put up a fisht. out of many spells beinng casted the high preist made the final move. He stabbed her with a dagger. Helga the witch you shall die. If I go down so will you. Helga explded her own body. The demons from hell shed tears for the famous witch Helga, Thus I tell you this story in memory of my mistrees. She transmitted her memories and told me to share it with the rest of the world. She was a noble women and will forever be respected.

__**Your Truely

Sri Nickolos.**__ PEER REVIEW (Saint Michael)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?  I think that the plot is rather original but then again it is kind of revolutionary. The only advice that i have for the author is to keep up the good work.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? It satisfied me and i would not change it.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?