ISKL+Ni

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.

I first opened my eyes to see the world on the 26th of August 1997. I come from Bangkok, Thailand and my name is Ni. My favorite sports are: horse riding, rock climbing, badminton, basketball, soccer, dodge ball, and gymnastic. I like horse riding, gymnastic, and dodge ball the most because for horse riding and gymnastic you practice on your balance. Dodge ball is fun because you need to be quick and steady and dodge ball is pretty tempting. My favorite subject is math because I like word problems and math is fun.

**Paste your story here:**
Ni Plodpluang April 14th Copying Homework "Harriet, you didn't do your homework again. Well this time you aren't going to copy mine,"Annie yelled at her friend and started walking away."Do you really think so," Harriet said and with one quick moment snatched Annie's homework book from her. On the next day Harriet did the same thing to Annie but she didn't notice that her health teacher was watching them. That afternoon the health teacher called Annie in for a little talk. "Hello Annie, why don't you take a seat." She calmly said. "Did I do something wrong?" Annie asked. "No, you didn't. It's just that this morning I saw you with Harriet and I saw what Harriet did." "Yeah! It has been going for a couple of days now. Harriet wasn't doing her homework, and she would drag me out at the beginning of school, take my homework book and copy it to hers." "Well that is going to be fix. I kind of have something in mind. Tomorrow I will be bringing in Harriet's mom and I want her to see what her daughter has been doing at school. Where will Harriet be dragging you to this time?" The health teacher asked. "To the same place, behind the climbing wall." Annie said. "So let's find out what will happen tomorrow." On the next day...The health teacher has brought Harriet's Mom and were hiding at a corner. When Harriet and Annie arrived Harriet started of by saying "Where's your homework book? I want it. Now!" She screamed. " Am not giving it to you," Annie said holding her bag that stored the homework book tightly. Harriet's Mother was totally stunned by her daughter's action but kept quiet. Harriet pulled the bag out of Annie's hand and searched for her homework book. When she found it she quickly flip it open and started to copy the answers inside...Suddenly right at that moment Harriet's Mother appeared from her hiding place and shouted, "That's enough, Harriet. You will be going to boarding school." Then she dragged her daughter away.

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.) Why did you choose to write your story about copying homework? Do you have any connections to the story? 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? Your plot is very original and uniqe. You definitly showed lots of personality in your writing. I suggest that you make your story a little more easy to read, so that your viewers can understand your writing better. 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? The problem in the story is simple, and amusing, although, it would be better if you added a little more dialog, suspense, and some more tension. You really got to let those things build up in the story. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?