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Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favorites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame. Shakayla I like doing stuff on the computer. I love Yams, my favorite sport is wrestling, I love this show called Sunny with a Chance.=====

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By:Shakayla S. I am going to tell you a story about 5 friends and their names are Shakayla, Greatt, Crissa, Austin,Baley. They were all 15teen Greatt, Austin, and Baley were jocks and Shakayla and Crissa were cheerleaders. One day the Girls dared the boys to go spend a night at old maids house. But old maid has been dead for 10 years. She had no kids but she had dolls. If you see her don’t scream our she will rip out your jaw. If we have to spend a night so do you. Said Austin. The girl said fine. Tomorrow we go. Friday the 13th.On Halloween. But they did not know it was maids anniversary. She all ways comes back to her house.But what I have to take my little sister trick or treating. Said Shakayla. OMG! SHAKAYLA WHY SHE IS JUST A WINEY LITTLE BABY WHO GETS EVERY THING SHE WANTS BY CRYING ABOUT IT.Well shes still my little sister. Kelly is spoiled little brat. Said Crissa. I will talk to my mom. Said Shakayla. So the girls met the boy at old maids lawn. The boys tried to scare the girls but it did not work. So the kids went in the girls got scared the pretended to be macho And tuff but they weren’t. Then Baley said come here You guys I see some thing. No you don’t Baley your just tring to scare us. No I’m seareas I see some thing Baley your Scaring Kelly so stop it, said Shakayla. Hello whos down there. Said a voice. All the girls screamed. Then a girl walked down stairs. Who are you. Said Austin. I’m Dani I live here and what are you doing in my house.

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1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

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5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?