Kayla

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 * Hi, my name is Kayla coyle **
 * Grade:8th**
 * Best Holiday:holloween **
 * Birth Month:november **
 * Career Goals: **
 * Favorite Band(s): little wane **
 * Favorite Food:pizza **
 * Favorite Munchies: **
 * Favorite soft drink: water **
 * Favorite Subject: computers **
 * Pet Peeve: **
 * Pets: bird **

the weard day at school by kayla One day I was near a school and there was some one near me and I was not friends with this person and I was not near them and this person was not my best friend and I asked them and I talked to her and she was not my friend and she asked my friend and she looked at me and I looked back at him and she was friends with him and I was mad at her and she is my best friend and I was not scared at all and I scrammed at she was mad at me for days and Dianna see my cry and she say why are you cry and I sad not to talk too me at all and I was not her friend no more and I was nerves was she wood say that and I was not good at Liang too her and she was not the best at this and he seen me and I sad I was not his friend and he was crying and a sad sorry for it and Dianna was a super hero and he was the villain. And after he was not mad at me or sad and I wiped his tears from his face and sad don’t cry he looked at me for one min and he sad don’t cry. And I did stop and he was happy and I found out he was a robber and he dresses as a boy and wean I found out I was the girl he was after and Dianna made shore it was me and I ran for my life and Dianna was not happy too see him. And I was mad at him and I sad I was not the girl he wonted an a walked a way and Dianna was waiting for me and I was not his friend any more and I was happy and Dianna was my mom was home wean I got off the bus he followed me home and I sad I was not in the mood to talk too him at all and my mom though he was the nice kid and I was not the one that I was with and he look at me all the time and Dianna was not the one who did this was not his friend and I look and I found him in a alleyway and my mom was happy too see him and I was not happy too see him at all. And I was not is friend and I send too stop bothering me. I was so mad at him and I did not talk too him and I was reading a book and Dianna was my best friend so I tolled his she was my friend and she did not like him at all and he was ok with that and I stop talking too him and I ran I was I ask him If this was a game and he seed no and he was not the none I was not his friend or best friend I was still mad at him and Dianna was my best friend and I tolled her what was going on and I was at home wean I tolled her. And he was annoying me and I was not listing too him brag a bout a test and I got really mad at him. Dianna was my best friend and I tolled her if she wonted too go to my house. Wean I got home he was there and I was sick so I was not paying attention too how was at my house. And Dianna was mad at him for being there but my mom invited him over for dinner with out asking me I was sick and I did not want to get him sick ether but he did not get sick. I was mad but sad because I felt bad for him and I felt better that he forgave me. Dianna was not mad at him anymore. I was happy Dianna was a super hero. I no why she was hear too help me and I was not my self. She was happy that I listing too her. I was not happy too see her she was mad at me all the time. She was not the problem I had with her it was him. he did not wont me to suffer and i was happy. the end

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5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?