SO-Kyle+F.

**Introduction:**
Hello my name is Kyle Friedrich (Freed ric) thats how you pronunce my last name (to all who thought is was Fried rich). I actualy save my cash (unlike others), I save now spend later. Because of that I got $400 in Cash. And thats pretty much it. Oh and also the story below isn't finished yet. So enjoy reading whats there.

** Weekday Mornings Stink ** By Kyle Friedrich 9:00 pm Sunday’s ending, the weekend is ending, school is tomorrow, I have to go to sleep, I hate weekday mornings. As I go to sleep in my old lumpy bed, I think about how horrible Monday is going to be. Now I’m asleep in my horrible bed, I dream about my school in dread, I hate weekday mornings. Now it’s the worst time of the week, Monday. As I go to my horrible school doing homework all day there no fun in this I always say, why couldn’t it just stay Saturday? As the teacher gives our quizzes back from Friday, I got an A just like every other day. As I get back home from this very boring day from my horrible school day, I shouted, I had enough already! I am now at my home finally I said. Four more days left I hate weekday mornings. Now today is Tuesday the second boring day of the week. I am at oh so horrible school I just got back a test, guess what it is a A it is always easy getting one ** To be continued **

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?