VV+Blake

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.

Lost Bob got lost at archery trail and bob twisted his ankle. he hoped that someone would come and find him and take him home. It might be his friend Larry that saves him in the story of lost. Larry is a friend at archery. Or his dad but it would be very scary to get lost at the trail because there are lots of trees and the forest there is very thick with bush. If bob would have to stay the night bob would make a fire and hunt for food with his bow then I would cook it for dinner because there is lots of deer and other animals that you can eat there which is good. he would have to make his own bed out or sticks which would not be comfortable but he is sure his dad or Larry would find him before the night because they would notice that he was gone and go out to find him. he also thinks that if they did not find him before the night he would probably make it threw the knight and they would find Bob then. Bob hoped that it never happens because Bob has never bean permanently lost which is good because it is scary being lost. With the animals all around him in the woods making weird sounds and you think that some things going to jump out on you in the middle of the knight. But personally Bob would not like to spend the night in the forest. And if Bobs brother were to get lost with him his B rother would go hunting and he would make the fire. And fetch water from the lake there. But if the old archery shack was to be open then Bob and his brother could make a fire in the wood stove that they have there and they also have pots for boiling water so they could use for dinner but on the way there from the forest to the shack someone would find them by then Because you have to walk across the street and many cars go up and down that street every day so they would be long found by then and probably be home sweet home and safe. And then Bob and his brother would tell everyone in there family about it and how it was like spending the night in the forest. Then they would tell them about what Bob and his brother did for all there meals. they would say we went hunting with our bows and there mom and there sister would be disgusted and probably throw up. Which would be disgusting. Well this is yours truly Bob and I hoped you liked my story of lost and thanks for listening to my story.

The End

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? what's it manily about? 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? The story is good but not something i would write about. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?