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**Introduction: **===== Hello! My name is Jordan Wilson! My Birthday is November 13 and this year its on Friday the 13th!!! I love playing baseball! I usually play all summer. I like playing other sports too. I play Football, Basketball, Track, and Cross Country! I have 3 other siblings. My oldest brother Jake who is 21. My only sister Melissa who is 20. My other brother Josh who is 17. My Mom works at the Court House as an ITT director. My Dad is the leading Sargent for the "West Central Drug Task Force." I'm the baby of the family at age 12. As you can probaly tell I love to be outside or hanging out with my friends! My favorite food is Tater tot hot dish, it's amazing! You just read a little bit about ME! Jordan Richard Edgar Wilson!!!!!!!!__//**☺**//__

**Paste your story here:**
By Jordan Wilson Jake was AMAZING at basketball. He even beat the best player in the world! But one day he met this boy named Jordan Wilson at the YMCA. He had once beaten this man named “Willy” (for short) but “Willy” was looking’ for a rematch! Willy had just finished a basketball tournament so he was very tired. Willy said, “Hey bud, you beat me once but can you beat me again?” Jake said, “Oh yes, I will always beat you.” And, so they played a game to 21 points! Everybody at the YMCA was watching on, Jordan went on a 20-0 run to start off!! But you must get exactly 21. So Willy tried to draw a foul and got it. He was at the free throw line to shoot 2 free throws! He missed the first one! (Remember it is 20 to 0). And Jordan shoots the next one and.... IT IS IN! Willy said, “Ha-ha in your face I won.” He went on, “I thought you would always beat me?” “Yes, yes I know what I said,” Jake went on, “I want a rematch” “Well ok,” said Willy, “that’s fine with me.” So they played another game to 11. Jake got the first 5 points, but it was all Willy from there. Willy went away from there! He went on an 11-0 run. Willy ended up beating Baler Boy Jake! 11 to 5. Willy’s basketball team was facing Jakes team at a tournament in Canada. They were guarding each other and scoring every possession, until one of Willy’s team mates helped him stop Jake and they turned it over to take the lead in their next possession. But Jake was dribbling very quickly down the court. And he shots a half court hall mary to win the game! But it hits off the backboard and bounces… IN! THEN OUT! NO IT’S IN But now it’s out and fell on the ground and the buzzer sounded. WILLY’S TEAM WINS THE GAME!
 * Baler Boy Jake**

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