Jenna

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 * **Hi, my name is Jenna **
 * Grade: 8th**
 * Best Holiday: My Birthday **
 * Birth Month: August **
 * Career Goals: **
 * Favorite Band(s): JONAS BROTHERS **
 * Favorite Food: Pasta **
 * Favorite Munchies: Candy **
 * Favorite drink: Water **
 * Favorite Subject: Science **
 * Pet Peeve: Biting My nails **
 * Pets: Rabbit **

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“10 minutes till were on John!” Called Nicky. “Okay” Yelled John from the dressing room. BoGar was tuning his guitar while I was helping Nicky, Johnna and Keneth warm up. “ 5 minutes boys” yelled Dennis from backstage. The guys fixed up their.\ softly. As a group we pray for a good performance and all cheer. We walked outside our dressing room and all we heard was the cheering and shrieking of the fans outside. Getting into our spots for the beginning, we are all so pumped because of all the fans and their support. The stage turns dark as the screaming fans lose control and the music starts. Me and BoGar walk on the stage and then the lights come up as the boys walk on the stage. “Hello we are the……ONASJAY OTHERSBAY!” “Welcome to our Poison Ivy tour!” We played about six songs and then we had a special guest Nemi Kovato and Saylor Twift, while we took a break. “Wow this crowd is so amazing” said Keneth. “ Yeah, the know almost all the words and dancing” said Nicky. “ Show time Boys” said Dennis. Walking back on stage again we so exciting because I love all the energy and the crowd. When concerts are over I cant wait till the one the next day because it is so fun performing different crowds everyday and even in different countries. I’ve been in the band for about a year now and its been so fun and a good experience. Yesterday I got a phone call. It was the manager from a record copy. They asked me all questions like how old I was, my experience, and if I wanted to join another band or do a solo album. I didn’t know what to say of what to say or what to say or what to do. This was almost the hardest decision I have ever had to make. I was thinking, should I tell the boys? What would they say? They would probably want me to go and try it out. The whole night I couldn’t sleep. I was thinking about what choice I wanted to make. The boys would know what to do. When I woke up in the morning I was very apprehensive. I got dressed and drove to the boy’s house where we would go on the tour bus and get ready for our show. At 5:46 AM I arrived and the guys were boarding on the bus. ”You can park your car over there, John.” Said Denise from the doorway of the house. As I drove in and everyone waved, I took my guitar out of the trunk and walked to the bus. As I loaded it on I waved as the boys were at the table eating breakfast. “ Come sit down and eat” said Keneth. I took a bowl and sat down. “ Guys I got some news.” I said. “Are you okay?” said Nicky. “ Yeah I’m fine.” So I continued on. “ The call was about a new position, like a record deal.” ”Oh.” Said Nicky. “ “Well I don’t know if I want to take it.” “ Come on John give it a shot, there will be bigger things then us and you can expand your career.” Said Johnna. “Okay ill try it out.” I said. We played our show last night and had a ball. I wouldn’t know if it was going to be the last concert I played at, but I had to enjoy it. The next day I called up the guy and told him I wanted to schedule a meeting. He told me I could come in now but I wasn’t near ready. I still had to practice and get ready, I told him what if I came in tomorrow. He said sure. That night I went to the boys house to hang out as if it was the last night I could see them. They all helped me encouraged me. “Hey John if you do take the job would it be okay if we held auditions for a new guitar play?” Said Nicky. “Sure” I said. As days passed waiting for another call I finally got one. They wanted me to come back in to see what new songs and music I had learned. The boys had found a guitar player already to replace me. Her name was Noeki. She was a 17year old girl who was really good at guitar player. It looks like there isn’t a spot left for me in the band if I decided I didn’t want to take the deal. I bet if I told them I didn’t wanted to take the job they would let me take my spot back.

Well time has passed. I tried to stick with the new band I was working with but It didn’t work as well as I planned. I rejoined the OnasJay Othersbay and everyone was so happy and all celebrated. I guess taking the chance didn’t hurt anyone and wasn’t the right time.

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2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

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