SO-Bjorn+L.

**Introduction:**
hello my name is Bjorn i am 6th grader i like to ski, bike, and hang out with my friends as much as i can. i also play piano, trumpet and guitar my favorite food is pizza, hamburgers and steak.

**Paste your story here:**
A Knights Life By Bjorn Lindstedt He walks on the gravel trail that goes by the village. It is a dark night and the only light you can see is the full moon and the stores that are still open. //Bang// the hammer hits the anvil in the black smith’s shop, smoke comes out of the little chimney on the straw roof and the horrible stench of making leather filled the air. The man walks into a restaurant called The Knights Tavern. A few hours later a group of other men walk out with leather armor on and axes on their back. One strong man steps to the front of the group with a round shield on his left arm and a newly sharpened sword in his hand and says, “We will ride to the castle at dawn to kill the king so then we will rule the castle of the kings”. The men ride off right about when the village man walks out of the tavern “ I wish I could be a strong knight some day so then I will get money for my family and some day maybe even be a king. That night the man had a dream about a dragon coming into the village and then he put on a set of amour and took a sword out of a sheath on his belt and stabs the dragon smack dab right in the heart. The king gives the man a royal sword. The man wakes up from screams the screams sounded like they were coming from the castle; he instantly got out of his bed and ran outside to see what had happened. Smoke was drifting from the castle door; the same men who were at the tavern are standing right in the middle of the action. Those men were taking over the village and castle! That day people said that the king was dead. Later there was a meeting for the whole region who should be the king. The king’s son is so weak and dumb he could not be the king so the kings of other main cities decided to chose his cousin sir strongmen and yes he was a very strong man he originally was a battle master with good skills also he lead a battle against the goblens of kinwik so he also has alot of experience with battles. To be continued

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?