SO-Libbi+D.

= Hello, My name is Libbi, I am 12 years old and i am in 6th grade at South Middle School (SMS) I attend Mrs. Hawkenson's english class everyone morning first period. We have been working on 1001 tales stories to put on wikispaces.com for you all to read. I like to sing on my free time, and i like to watch movies with my friends on saturday nights. 6th grade is super fun at south middle school. We have a lot of choices.

** Daisy, Oh Daisy ** By Libbi Dicks

Then again, it happened every day. She had done it again. The worst of all. Exactly like the last time. She ran away. Never to see that awful face again. She was lost in all of the terror that was put into her. Daisy Johnson was the one and only one who had nothing in her school. She cried every night wishing for her mother to find her hiding in the bush far far away from, that woman. No one knew exactly why she ran away. Most people think its because she couldn’t stand living with Helen, her god mother. The rudest lady in all of the land. She never cared about anyone but her and her dog, Doodles. Daisy ran away to save her powers. The powers that every one dreamed of. To fly high in the sky. But once her powers were with her she was a bird. A smart, devious bird that could do anything. Daisy was the smartest student and the nicest girl in the class. She had 3 friends named Jenny, Rose, and June. They didn’t know about her super powers. But one day they suspected something. Daisy always carried around her blue sequined hankers chief. That day she wasn’t at school, but after school everyone saw the new super hero with a blue sequined hanker chief in her back pocket. Rose called Jenny and Jenny called June. They didn’t know what was going on. The day before that Daisy told her friends “No matter what, she will always have her blue sequined hanker chief would be in her back pocket”. So that means the girl with the blue hanker chief was Daisy. No one knew that Daisy had powers. She didn’t either.

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? Good story I enjoyed much and very creative.-gabriel 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? I is very interestibg and a little bit confusing because of the metaphores but I like it. 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? Yes, because I is very original and each character is different.-Gabriel 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? Libbi, haha great story :p Great, intro and story! haha