ISKL+SunHae+C

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.  Hi! My name is Sun Hae and I'm from Korea. I am eleven years old. My favorite things to do are read, play the clarinet, play the piano and keep in touch with my friends by MSN or E-mail. When I grow up, I would like to be a clarinetist. I love playing the clarinet. I am in band junior at school and I really enjoy band. I take clarinet lessons, piano lessons and mandarin lessons. Even though I take mandarin tutors, I learn Spanish at school. I find both languages fascinating. My favorite food is a Korean noodle. My favorite movie that I watched in my 11 year life was Bedtime Stories. I really liked the problem and plot of the movie. For me, I don't really play video games or any kinds of games. Hello i´m not your assigned partner but you sound interestiong. if you want to know more about me check out workshop B on benjamin franclin school my name is Oskar Helander. if you want to e-mail me my adress is oskarh15@bfischool.org

**Paste your story here:**
Saving Energy Source

Right now, our world is having problems with global warming. But one of the most important problems in global warming is saving the energy source. It’s kind of natural for most people to leave the lights on even though they don’t need it, like once a girl named Kelly. She was one of the people who didn’t really care about saving energy. But she learnt that saving energy is really important and by her saving more energy, it would make a big difference in the world. Kelly had some help (to learn about saving energy source) from her friend named Cindy.

Cindy was one of the best friends Kelly had and Cindy took a big part about saving our energy source on earth. She always saved the energy and convinced other people to save energy. One day, Cindy went to Kelly’s house to have a sleepover in Kelly’s mother’s car. The first thing Cindy noticed when they arrived at Kelly’s house was that all the lights in Kelly’s room were lit. “Kelly, why did you turn on all the lights in your room when no one’s in there?” asked Cindy. “Well, I probably forgot to turn them off…too bad, who cares about that?” “But Kelly, don’t you care about saving the light energy source and taking part in helping global warming?” “You see, Cindy, it’s just too hard…now, why don’t we just go into my house and play with my dogs?” “Fine…but,” “No buts’ come on!” With that, Kelly skipped into her house, holding Cindy’s wrist. After a while since Cindy and Kelly were in Kelly’s room playing with her dogs, Kelly said she was hungry and they decided to go downstairs to the kitchen. And once again, Kelly forgot to turn the lights off. “Kelly! You forgot to turn off your lights again!”Cindy informed. “Sorry! Now can we get some snacks?” “But Kelly…” “Come on down, Cindy, what’s taking you so long?” So Cindy turned off the lights and went downstairs where Kelly was waiting on the table with two peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, one on each plate, for her and Cindy. “Kelly, can you remember to turn off your lights whenever you are not using it?” “Fine, just eat!” After they finished their peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, they went to the living room to watch some T.V. And guess what? “Kelly! You forgot to turn off the lights in the kitchen AGAIN!” “You know what, Cindy? I am so really sorry…that won’t happen again…SERIOUS.” “Do you promise Kelly?” “Yep.” And then they watched some different T.V. shows for about 1 hour and then decided to go back up to Kelly’s room. But then… “Kelly! You forgot to turn off the T.V!” “You know what Cindy?” “You know what Kelly? To get electricity going in this world we’re living in, there needs to be power which comes from machines. And whenever those machines do their work, that’s where pollution comes in. The pollution kills animals, flowers, and even trees! I mean, trees, Kelly! It’s where we get oxygen from! Do you want flowers, animals and trees dying part because of you?!” “Oh my gosh! I had no idea of that! I am so~ sorry Cindy; I don’t want any flowers, animals or trees dying! Cindy, I promise that I will not waste any more electricity.” “Good,” replied Cindy. And then the two girls turned off the T.V. and had a good time for the rest of the day and Kelly didn’t forget to turn off her lights and T.V. (etc.) for the sake of animals, flowers, and trees dying. And that is how Kelly learnt her lesson, TO SAVE ENERGY SOURCE!

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)? Yeah, I think your story is quite original. And I really like your story about saving energy. You're story told me lot of information. And I like your characters. 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? I think they all perfact, but there's only one thing. I don't think that Kelly can change because of Cindy's only one paregraph, I mean, Kelly doesn't really care about saving energy for a long time, then how can she change in one day? 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? Your Characters are very likeable and life like. I don't know why. 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story? Your story's imagery and details are awsome, I can really see experience of this story. And, I want to see how Kelly change. 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author? Overall, I think your story made sence. And I think there are no suggestion. P.S you are good at English. I'm Korean too. __VV Chaeyoon__