ISKL+Dong+Yeup

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.

Hello, my name is Dong Yeup I'm from South Korea. My favorite sport is badminton and my favorite food is sweet and sour pork. I hobby is to play drum, and I play a lot of computer games (Diablo 2, Starcaft, and others). Malaysia and Korea are the only counties I stayed for more then a month. http://dongyeup.blogspot.com/

**Paste your story here:**
On a sunny day, JY, the B.I.G Company’s headmaster, was talking to the president of USA, giving him a bag full of money. He said, “Mister president, I find taxes a little too much these days on our company...”

Meanwhile, Jack, a new guy at B.I.G Company, was taking a look around the building. When he was walking by a small room in the hallway, he heard two people talking. “So, if I lower the tax, specially on your company, I take the money, right?” Another voice replied, “Yes.”

Soon, the man left and Jack walked in to the room, looking at his boss, JY. “Did you just give him a bribe?” jack asked. “Yes. Yes I did. This is the way our company survives. You’re one of us, so you’ll have to get used to it!” JY left and Jack stood there thinking that this wasn’t right. ‘Tomorrow, I convince the boss’ he thought.

Next day, Jack ran right up to the boss’s office in the morning. “Hey boss.” He said. But instead of talking, his boss replied with a cold look in to Jack’s eye. Jack sat down and started speaking to his boss about how bribes are unfair to other companies, what might happen if the police find out until his boss was as mad as he could be. “You’re fired!” Shouted JY with red eye and face. Soon, JY ran out of the office. But when he was going home that evening, he started to seriously think about if what he is doing is right.

Jack came to take his things from his desk, which he got to sit in only for two days, when the JY came. He said, “I’m sorry... I thought about what you said, and realized, you were right. I’ll take back what I said about firing you. I’m really sorry.” Jack accepted his apology and he was not fired.

THE END

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
(Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?