ISKL+MARK

**Introduction:**
Include some or all of the following, as well as a link to your blog: first name, what you like to do in and out of school, favourites (food, sport, hobby, TV show, video game, etc.), places visited, future plans, claim to fame.

Hi, my name is Mark. I am 12 years old and I come from Germany. My favorite things to do is hang out with friends, ,listen to music and go swimming. I go to the school Iskl and I like the school because i am able to have alot of fun. I have alot of friends and I hope to finish my school. But I will probably not finish my school. I am looking farward on tryng outfor the plays and ista. I have a brother wh is in 8th grade and his name is Lukas, I also have a dog called Nelson he is a poodle with black and white fur, unfortunetley he couldnt come to malaysia with us because I live in a hotel and it would be hard if we had a dog in the hotel. My dad works Area Manager and with that I have to move alot, I ben and lived in Germany, Turkey, Saudi Arabia, India, and now I am in Malaysia. :)

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__ Wild Tiger  __ In India there is a city called Tameruda. Next to this city is a wild jungle, with all animals including, tigers, leopards, elephants, mangoes, monkeys, rhinos, wild bores, bears and more then you could ever imagine. Rarely but very rarely a predator or an animal from the wild comes to visit this city, But on April 14 1978 a full grown tiger (male) visited the poor city. Tiger now remains in the streets of Tameruda. He so very deep in the city and can’t find his way back. A couple of hours after the incident I was informed about it. This was strange and there must of bin a reason for the tiger to come in hear, I have worked for the animal life department for 16 years and never has anything happened like this. I had to get my team and capture him as quickly as possible. This is very dangerous, anyone could hurt this tiger. I was very skilled in things like this but this could be my first real challenge. I noticed how much time I had wasted so I thought I should get my team and get this over with. “Josh, Jack, Bob, we’re going in to catch the tiger” I saw there faces light up. I got what I needed, I was in charge of the tranquilizers, (I was mostly never needed) Bob was in charge of if chaining the animal together, Josh was the assistant of Bob and Jack to the tests and the extra needed stuff. My eyes froze on the clock, it was time to go. Every minute was precious. I got the cart keys and we raced off to the last location of the tiger. We arrived and talked to a man to have last seen the tiger. The man explained to us how he saw a cut on the thigh of the tiger and headed south west from here. We set of with the car again, we drove 2 kilometers south west and then stopped. From there we took are gear and set of by foot. 4 hours past and we walked on without stops until Bob said “hey guys look at this, tiger foot print, dude it fresh” Josh went over “Aye it fresh eh, should be here around somewhere, ha” said Josh. We followed the tracks to a deserted construction site. There then we could here the light and grumpy footsteps of the tiger. We all took cover behind a brick wall, the brick wall move and shaked a lot, no doubt it would fall. I checked around the corner to see the tiger and yes it was in clear site of us. Then my stared at the gigantic wound the tiger had on his thigh, it was as long as his arm. It looked horrible. I passed on the information to my mates. The tiger walked passed the brick wall and we all stayed quiet. The tiger was walking around in a circle and we stayed quiet for hours…………………………………………………………………….. SNAP! A twig snapped under my feet make a loud noise. This caused the alarm of the tiger. It looked our direction but unable to us I could here the angriness in its growling, then bob leaned back on the brick wall…………………..THUMP! The brick wall collapsed. I was shocked our cover was blown; the others were as shocked as me. We had to act now if we wanted to stay alive. We circled around the tiger; the tiger was confused because to be with an injured angry tiger not the situation you would want to be. We circled the tiger and then Bob threw the rope with all his might around the tiger’s neck and then as the tiger’s eyes met Bobs, Josh threw his rope around the tiger’s neck. This now trapped the tiger from going anywhere; Josh and Bon were holding it from opposite each other. It was Jacks turn to move, I was always ready to shoot the tiger with my tranquilizer if anything went wrong, but so far so good. I was giving out the commands to my mates since I was the leader. Jack was slowly making is move towards the tiger slowly very slowly, then with no warning took the net and swung it over the tiger, another advantage for me and my gang. Now we waited out and stopped for the tiger to stop fighting. Another 3 hours passed and then finally the tiger lay down in surrender. I went up as quickly as possible and injected the poison to put him to sleep. Bob and Josh went to get the car, while I waited with Jack. Couple of hours passed, I was a stupid idea for us not bring the car I thought. I was beginning to get worried because the tiger would wake up soon. I saw a twitch the tigers paw then another the whole leg moved, it then stood up write, I called Jack but he wouldn’t answer because he was around the corner talking on his phone. The tiger started biting the roped off, after a coupe of seconds he was free. I reached for my tranquilizer and in that second the tiger leaped at me and it was just in that second where placed my tranquilizer vertically between me and the crushing teeth of the tiger, I fell and I pushed my gun forward but the tigers strength was unbelievable, I was only a breath part away. I could fell the tiger’s breath on me; I tried and tried to push him. I thought of one thing that could help me, I head butted the tiger right in the face, putting it off guard and then pushed with all my might and flipping it over, I then dived behind an oil container. I saw the car come. This didn’t help me in any way, I was still in trouble. I could hear the growling behind me and I knew it was right behind the oil container, I could here the sound of a sniff and I was sure that tiger could smell me. Then looked and saw the paw right next to me, one more step and I was dead. My men were all watching since they couldn’t do anything. My mind was race through my head trying to think what to do, I thought fast and pushed over the oil container soiling but missing the tiger all over the floor, this is what I wanted to happen, I then got the tiger confused and occupied so I then sprinted to the car, everyone followed. Then the tiger decided to run through the middle of the construction sight. Josh was driving and off we raced after the Tiger, we turned and jumped and bumped, slipped and were out off control while driving through the contstruction.For the Tiger wasn’t as fast because of its injury and we took the advantage off that. Josh drove right next to the tiger. I took my tranquilizer and aimed I was in clear, I pulled the trigger and then in that exact moment the car went over a bump missing the tranq. I way was blocked josh pulled over as fast has human possible and then right when he pulled over to go in front of the tiger I shot without aiming and the bullet hit the tiger’s chest in a second, tumbling and flipping on the ground not moving. The job was done, the tiger was held till he was cured and then put back to his home, the jungle for a free life again.

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