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Introduction:** My name is Kyli strenke my favorite subjects in school are the S.S.and Art class.Hobies of my softball and some sports i like to play are football and hockey because my older brother curt played it.I think it is and awesome sport i hope to play them someday like my brother.I play the flute for school band,I also enjoy swimming.My favorite food is pineapples and anything Italian.i have one dog three sisters and 1 brother. my story is about how i got hit by a car but i just used a different name as me.hope you like my story.some other things about my social life like friends and stuff two of my best friends are Meghan not the girl in my story and hanna they are always there for me and somethings i do in the summer are go shopping with friends doesn't every girl and go swimming i do lots more but that would be alot to rite about so thats about it for now.♥♥♥♥♥♥ //**♥♥**//  ♥

Meghan By Kyli Strenke

One Day Meghan and her brother were at their dad’s house. It was about 7 o’clock when they decided to go on a bike ride. It was getting dark out and Meghan’s brother went ahead of her and Meghan caught-up to him //but// when she crossed the road. //**Bang!**//Meghan got hit by a car it all went black she didn’t know what was going on when Meghan woke up she was on the side of the road she didn’t know what to think what to feel as Meghan was thinking in her head as her brother ran up to her and called 911 the police came as fast as they could. Meghan could here is people around her talking and saying is she ok? Is she dead? What’s going to happen to her? As soon as the ambulance was done the road she could here it. She said in her head, “What’s going on? What’s happening to me?” Then one of them said, “Its ok, you’re going to be fine.” They put her into the ambulance truck they rushed to the hospital. When they got they rolled her into the room were they checked her out she had a blood clog in her head her, her skull got cracked, she sprained her ankle, and her chin got cut open they didn’t clean her because her accident was so bad they didn’t think she was going to make it threw the night. Everyone was anxious to know what happened to Meghan the doctors went and checked on her and they were all surprised that she was still alive they told here parents that she was still here and all the family members were so surprised and happy all at the same time. The doctor cleaned Meghan up and they fixed her up and she sated in the hospital for 3 more days then she went home. She didn’t go to school for 4 days everyone was asking her what happen she told them the hole story it ended out well what happened to Meghan I don’t know but she had a great life and she moved to a new school and made all new friends. based on a true story about Kyli Strenke

**Questions for Peer Reviewers**
Kyli your Story is cool story it is amazing. And love your Introductions.user:KyrahHa Kyrah (Think in terms of questions you would like to ask the author.)

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) What suggestions do you have for the author(s)?

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? What details would you like to see in the next revision of the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? What suggestions do you have for the author?